Thats Mine

oh wow! I love all of you so much! thankys! I feel so happy getting all these reviews! I'm so glad you also liked my other fic!...it was originally a one shot (If it sucked I didn't want to continue to put you through agony by adding another chapter), but since you liked it so much I'll continue it :)

Now its time to write back to all my wonderful reviewers! I'm going to thank you each personally! hehehe

crazieanimefan1: *sneaks you naked Bakura pics* ...*ehm*... any case, thanks for reviewing! I'd like to thank you personally for reviewing for this fic, and being the first to review for my other fic!

Pwetty Blood: no, he won't screw up, he's had practice with this kind of work (read this chappy to find out). I'd like to thank you personally for being the first to review for this fic. While I am writing a novel I hope to publish, this is only my second fic, the first was a Miroku (Inuyasha) one, but I think it sucked, you made my first good fic a really happy one for me, thank you!

Hiei449: Hi there and welcome! I know this is your first time reviewing for this fic and I'd like to thank you for doing so. I'd like to thank you personally thank you for reviewing and making my day happier, I hope this fic makes you happy!

Bambi: Thank you for reviewing, and welcome! This is my first ancient Egypt fic, I know I might have added a few inconsistencies in the time period, but I'm sure we can over look that *cough, cough*. Don't worry, I'll try to update as often as I can. I’d like to personally thank you for reviewing my fic.


I'd like to thank all my reviewers and readers! I know your probably reading this part going "here that crazy over happy idiot goes again, thanking all of us for just reading". But your reading is really important to me, I hope to reach my goal of a certain number of hits, and you being here makes my day. I'm not usually this happy, (lets leave it at that) but you all make my day :) *hands out YGO battle city Plushys* thank you all once again.

So with out further delay...

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(Bakura)

Why did I agree to this! I'm so stupid! Ryou, my poor Ryou! Marik, I'm so sorry my old friend. I kicked down the secret door after a heard the voices stop, and the foots steps walk away. The door collapsed on the floor with a bang. That’s how pissed I was with my self. I stormed out of that little space and looked around.

I...can't...believe it...my...my treasure...all my treasure...gone....

I felt a fury building deep inside of me, a cold pain filled fury as never I had felt before. My expression went totally blank. Then I started laughing, it wasn’t a laugh of joy, in was of extreme rage. I laughed loud, my voice echoing through my now empty halls.

(Malik)

Bakura kick down the door stepping out cautiously, turning around and surveying the room.

He suddenly paused; nothing in the room seemed to move. Suddenly a chill ran down my spimy bmy body shook from the cold. Was it just me or was the temperature dropping rapidly.

Then I heard it, the most frightening sound I had ever heard in my life, Bakura’s laugh. He didn’t laugh like he did before when he was happy, this laugh was filled with evil, spite, malice, rage, all these seem to resonate in his voice.

Bakura just gripped his silver hair and laugh; he laughed hysterically, the dim light of the torches casting a monstrous shadow on the wall. I back away.

Then he turned to me, those eyes, they burned holes through my soul. Those were the eyes of a mad man, a killer. They seem to strike out at me as if they had a life of their own. It cut me. Those were the eyes of a man who slaughtered masses of his fellow man, who would exterminate any thing that got in his way, the eyes of some one who would decimate his foe.

I fell back, tears coming to my eyes; I held my self and shook. That thing, that thing wasn’t human. Maybe some evil demon from the depths of the abyss risen in Bakura’s form. But that wasn’t the Bakura I thought I knew.

That laughter stopped, it died down. The awful laugh, the one that said the owner was going to gut you like a fish, suddenly stopped.

“Get up” were the words that echoed through the empty halls now. It was cold; I could hear the malice tipped edge it had.

“Please don’t hurt me Bakura! I know your mad that they took Ryou and Marik but I’m sure their alright” I said pleadingly, trying to calm Bakura down. “I’m pretty sure Ryou is alright he…” I stopped suddenly as a hand flew past me nearly hitting me, striking the wall.

“Do you think Ryou is the one I’m worried about?!” The voice said, its razor edged tone made me flinch.

“I-I thought you were worried about…” I said, he cut me off again.

“Ryou? No…I’m worried about Marik. Would you like to know an interesting fact about why you and Ryou were chosen to pleasure that Sekhmet damned Pharaoh? It’s because you look like us! You look so much fucking like us!!! We were his first fuck toys, his first sex objects! Do you think what you have is bad now? DO YOU!?!” Bakura shouted at me.

“I-I-I-I...” I stuttered, I didn’t want to look into those crazed eyes.

“You what? feel pity? Feel sorry? Feh. Let me guess you didn’t know and you never suspected any thing like that? Right? Feh. We ran away, we ran far away. We made our living as thieves, stealing from those who no longer needed it. Now….now it’s all gone, the treasure we collected. My silver Ryou, my golden Marik, and the two treasures I held most dear…GONE TO THAT CURSED PHARAOH!”

He was right, I never guessed that… I never knew. Some shuffling came from the secret door leading here. Apparently some one had posted guards just in case… I felt so sorry for those poor people as they entered this death trap.

“Hey any one down aghhhh!” was all the first guard said as Bakura jumped him and ripped out the mans throat with his hands. The second guard got it easier, Bakura just stole the first guards sword and slashed the mans stomach, spilling his insides all over the floor. After licking the bloody sword Bakura made his way up top. I followed him unsure what else to do, and afraid to stay any longer in this room that was now a crypt.

I mounted the camel that Bakura had found and we rode off to the palace. I pitied any creature that got in Bakura’s way.

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(Marik)

I didn’t like being with the Pharaoh, not after the horrible things that happened to me when he was near. But, for Ryou’s sake I will do any thing, I just hope Bakura doesn’t get too angry I’m gone.

I was led to the room I had spent my childhood in. A shiver went through me. The guards tossed Ryou and I on to the bed, a memory of being tossed on this same bed when I was younger made my hands start to shake. I wanted to get up and run, but the guard snapped a collar around my neck. No! not again! The door shut behind me and I started tugging at the collar around my neck. No use, it wouldn’t come off.

“Marik? Is that you?” asked a quite voice from the other side of the long bed. I looked up and saw Yugi sitting there.

“Yugi? What are you doing here?” I asked as I looked the scantly clad boy up and down.

“Well Yami, he thought, I mean he just bought me, I was happy, and did you know my master is dead, I don’t mind..” Yugi just rambled, apparently well aware of the fact that I was stareing at him. I turned away blushing.

Yami walked into the room.

“I’m so glad you all met, now we can skip to the fun stuff ne?” Yami said chuckling at his own little joke.

He crawled on to the bed, making his way towards Yugi, wrapping his arms around the smaller boy.

“This is Yugi’s first night here with all of us so lets be nice” Yami said snuggling his head in to Yugi’s hair.

“Um w-what do you mean exactly sir?” Yugi asked looking a little uncomfortable.

“I mean doing a little more then what we did at the tavern” Yami said slipping his Yugi’s cloths over his smooth ass.

“Oh” was all Yugi said in response.

“Ryou, help Yugi feel more comfortable” Yami said, Ryou obeyed quickly.

Sliding across the sea of silk that made up Yami’s bed, Ryou pulled Yugi’s head closer kissing him softly with such skill Yugi didn’t even resist.

(Yugi)

Those lips, when they kissed me my eyes flew open, I was just about to push him off, but no, I can’t.

Those soft hands roaming all over me, heated touches on my small body. I let a moan escape me. I didn’t know something could be this good.

Those lips pulled back, the need for air to great. The other boy circled me , coming up behind me and pulling me in between his legs.

Those skilled fingers playing with nubs on my chest, running down my frame until they found my inner thigh.

It was all too much, the sensations, making me more needy, making more of my lower need. The sensations of caress as this unfamiliar boy made him self familiar with the lay out of my body.

“Malik, if you would please remove Ryou’s cloths and your own, then help out Ryou” I heard Yami say.

I didn’t know what was going to happen, I didn’t want to think, I just wanted to fall in to his touch, this boy named Ryou.

The fingers left me for a moment as the owner of those hands had his cloths removed. Then the feelings continued, I felt something hard pressing in to my lower back, but it doesn’t matter, I have the same thing arising between my legs at the moment.

The Marik came over, he looked hesitant, I could see him staring at me again, at my flushed face, and my half lidded eyes. He seemed to pause and consider things before he moved closer to me.

The hands that were on my length stopped and was replaced by warm velvety lips, as Marik took me into his mouth. Ahh ohhh it feels so good, Marik’s hands running up and down the base of my arousal the friction was bliss.

Ryou’s hands have gone to playing with the nubs on my chest, I arch my back.

Yami’s come now, he said some thing, I’m too lost in the ecstasy to hear. I whimper as Marik’s mouth leaves me wanting.

Yami pushes me on to my side, laying down on the feather soft bed facing the wall. Yami says something again. I suddenly twitch as fingers enter me, I turn to see Marik stretching me out. His fingers cool from the slick substance he prepares my inside with.

Ryou is covering Yami, while Yami strokes the silver strands on Ryou’s head. The two other boys finish their task quickly and soon Yami is upon me. One quick thrust and he’s in me.

I let a little shout escape my lips. This feeling, it’s painful yet pleasurable. Yami launches in to a steady rhythm. I thrust back at him to keep the motion steady. Something fills me up inside as I release my self out side. My eyes close, it’s all too much.

(Ryou)

I watch Yugi fall asleep from his tough night. Poor thing. Maybe I shouldn’t speak so soon, Yami tucks Yugi in to bed, then turns hungrily to us.

“Now that the warm up activity is over, it’s time to play with some hard ball.” Yami says as he crawls closer to me and Marik. Suddenly I hear a gasp, I turn to see what the cause might be and see it.

A grinning shadow hovering in the window, its eyes are glowing with hell fire as it steps in to the room. I look closely, oh my gods…

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Hm…this was a good chappy ne? review and let me know what you think!

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