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for Thats Mine

by darkvixen

person Crimson 2006
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story!
person chloe
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!! you said that you will make a sequal for that's mine if someone ask you to. Well I'm asking!! The story was great but the end was too sad!!!
person Malik
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi ^.^
I wanted to say, that your story is very good ^.^
I like it .
I wish you have written more Marik x Malik scenes, but it's good ^.^
The End is a little bit fast, but it's logical ...
person c0nfus3d
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. you said you'd probably write a sequel so ima gonna see if u did. I would love to be wordy cause lord knows your stis tis that good but i wanna read more. bye
person sweetmisery
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story it had a great plot and a perfect ending
person Hiei449
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa!! awsome ass story!!! i will be sure to keep an eye out for the sequel!!!!!!
person Pwetty Blood
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that was absolute tragedy... So sad! Although the one part where Yami gets hit over the head with a vase again is hilarious! Anyway, provided that there will be a sequel, I'm guessing it's gonna take place in the present?
person crazimefamefan1
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I hope that's Bakura and Malik to the rescue although Bakura's suddenly got a mean streak going on here. Oh, and *giggles* thanx for the pics! Now I just have to hide them from my "friend" who's sleeping on the couch holding the Millennium Rod like it's a freaking teddy bear. Oh, and he snores worser than a chainsaw! It's more like three chainsaws taking down the entire forest! You're welcome about my review on your second fic. It was awesome! I think I remember something about your Inuyasha fic though. I have two myself there. You have to tell me how you managed to get these pictures! Bakura looks too damn hott! *drools on computer keyboard* Keep updating!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
T_T That was sad! But it was good as well! *giggles* Sneak around, huh? I wonder if Bakura even knows you did that. I have an idea though. *hands over pictures of Malik singing in the shower and other naked Malik pictures* Don't you just love it when you blackmail these guys? I had to sneak these to you before he *ahem* finds out. I can't wait to see the second chapter in your second fic! you you around there!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One last thing...MAKE A SEQUEL! THIS WAS TOO GOOD FOR ONE FIC!

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