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MY BABY GORRIERRIED sniffles* i so happy! *cries*

Yay!!!! Finally they are together!!!! I'm so glad and thankfully there was no annoying otogi to bother them this time. I'm glad that jou didn't let seto take him so fast and made him wait a little. At least they talked about whhey hey remembered at wat was funny that jou had beaten seto before an how they met.

Well, so many things happened in this chapter. I felt so bad when jou was raped by that damn otogi. That guy is crazy. I'm glad seto found him before he did it again. Then seto asked him to marry him and i was estatic and also that jou didn't seem afraid of him like some people are after they are raped. But then, otogi had to come back and ruin it again. Can't they send him to jail or something. Am sure at the very least they can get a restraining order. Oh well, they seem to be rebuilding from their expirience and things seem to have gone to normal, i wonder for how long?

I liked the part about the corporate bastards trying to take over and when you mentioned that seto would just type 'I miss Jou' over and over. But then once again, that damn freak, dice bearing jerk had to come up!!! What is his problem! Can't he understand NO! The poor jou was turned into katsuraya (sorry for pelling it wrong), and i don't get how it was that he changed back to normal? One minute he was her and then he started dancing and in the middle of things he was him again. Anyway, i liked the chapter and i hope that they deal with otogi soon.

Yes!!!!!! Finally!!!! This was such a great chapter! First seto is getting ready to propose and then they finally found a way to get otogi to back, ev, even though i don't think that will work for long. ur mig might scare him off for a while but that guy is insane. Or maybe he will finally realize to just give up, i doubt it. Then jou stood up for himself and otogi was down on the floor. That was great. The greatest part of the chapter was the proposal!!!!! Aaaaa Kawaii!!!! Then of course it was wrapped up with a nice lemon, sigh, just wonderful.

(review for chapter 3)
0_o! wow! this is a kawaii story! i love it! i'll be sure to review again when i finish reading this later tonight.
*looks at clock*
IEEE!! is 8pm!! i gotta go mow the lawn! well i gotsta gista sta till later!

:sniff, siff: That was so beautiful!!!! I wish i could actually see that. I thought for sure otogi was going to try and pull something. I'm glad he didn't and everyone is happy! I loved the fic, too bad its over, great job.

EEEEEEYAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!!
*dances*
seto/jou is my fave pairing!!! XD! they are just ssoo KAWAII!! i love this story! i hope this isnt the end! i hope otagi (i dont know how to spell is name) gets it in the end. I KNOW! have yami send him to the shadow realm!! that way he cant bother seto and jou anymore!! well i gotsta git!! plz email me when you update! ^_____^!! asta!!

THATS IT!!!!! there better be more coming^___^...hehehe...oOoOo...whats Otogi gonna do now.....i cant wait to see....at f i t i thought that you were gonna have Otogi come and rthe the wedding but hey theres alwase more stuff to come right?...AHHH!!!!!