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Interesting......... anymore seems like a very good start to me. What's going to happen to joey? How will they find him? And how soon will kaiba kick their butt?

An interesting beginning. I'd like to see more. One thing: I doubt kaiba shops for his own groceries. He has staff to do that for him. If he were out shopping it would be for something expensive like a new suit or watch. And he wouldn't have anyone put it in the trunk. He'd carry it or have it delivered if larger. He is rich after all and as a CEO his time is valuable.

Hmm, this is looking good.