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for Obedience Is A Virtue

by Nickolai

person Ann-marie
schedule January 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update the story is awesome I need more, when will you update "puppy dog face"
person Kira
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More please your such a good writer and this is a really good story. Please write more
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh do please continue!
This has to be one of my favourite KaiJou fics, they way Kaiba is written is so creepy, I want to know what else he'll do to Joey! ;)
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can absolutely hear Setos voice when I'm reading this. I like the training and the chastity belt.

It was a little strange when Mokuba came in. It made Seto seem not all there. Makes me wonder where you're going with this.
person invisble
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have not been on this site for a few months, but yours is the first story I looked up, and was so happy to see an update.
Keep up the good work, I can hardly wait. Until next time.
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is soo creepy. But I just can't stop!!! I don't understand! It must be something in your writing that makes it really appealing to read. All I can say is that Seto stops being a creepy fuck and realizes that Joey is person who deserves to at least be treated as one. Then I will root for Joey having feelings for Seto.
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Huh... You know, this reminds me very vaguely of Human Centipede, only that movie is more disturbing than this fanfic.

Now, this definitely a unique take on the whole puppyshipping thing. I'll keep an eye on it.
person invisble
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You updated a day later but i'm sorr it took me a week to see it and read. I am so totaly hooked on this story, i love the dark love theam. I can't wait to see how he intro's mokie to this. let's face it i just can't wait for the whole thing to be revieled. Keep up the wonderful story.
person Neon C
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I'm REALLY loving this story! Please update soon!
person lili
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am LOVING this. Seto's characterization thus far is just..brilliant - he's crazy, obsessive and entirely domineering...I'm very much hooked. Blame my love for a completely dominant Kaiba, It's great to see the extremes of his personality being pushed. Joey is just adorable and I applaud the creativity that went into his current state of being (tails=LOVE XD)

This is so far..quite interesting indeed - Cruel, dark and sexy at the same time. I can't wait for the next update! :D