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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwww his Aibou always bring light in his life
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would avoid the use of Japanese in English sentences because someone shouldn't have to look in a Japanese dictionary to understand what you are trying to say. If you do not know what I'm referring to, say "partner," not "aibou." If it wouldn't sound good in English, it won't sound any better in Japanese.
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute !
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice piece! It really does make "sense".
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giddy and envious* You have such a beautiful way of expressing so much in so few words, and did a fabulous job of capturing Yami's 'silent suffering' so to speak--the way he's so calm outwardly, but his thoughts spiral darker each moment. Very nice; and his interaction with Yugi at the end...pure devotion. Loved it; thanks for writing!
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was so very beautiful. I really liked it! Poor Yami, the darknes tortures him from the past. So sad. But yugi is there to make it all better! Go Yugi.
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh that is so good! I wish you'd write more to the story. It's so sweet and gentle. I love it!