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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo (angry face) stupid dreams! anywho looove it!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It could never be a stupid story as each author writes in their own perspective with their own style. I like how Seto is becoming more like a real person and how this story is developing. I can't wait to see what Mokuba does for the big date!! As always, waiting excitedly for the next chapter! xoxo
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was so sweet ^^
Seto is so so cute !
Update please!
Seto is so so cute !
Update please!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter!
That was so sweet and cute ^^ I love the interaction between Jou and Seto. Aren't they beautiful together?
Jou seems so much in love with Seto and he is very protective isn't he? I love seeing Jou protect Seto. That's so cute ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter.
That was so sweet and cute ^^ I love the interaction between Jou and Seto. Aren't they beautiful together?
Jou seems so much in love with Seto and he is very protective isn't he? I love seeing Jou protect Seto. That's so cute ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story very much.
Hey, you're not using the concussion to set up something REALLY bad happening, are you? *narrows eyes suspiciously*
'Ko
Hey, you're not using the concussion to set up something REALLY bad happening, are you? *narrows eyes suspiciously*
'Ko
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, take that Yami! =p. But6 poor Seto it just really wasn't his day. This story just keeps getting better with every chapter. Keep it up! xoxo
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this chapter... kinda cause Yami and Tristan are ass' in this one P.S. i wish you would update more often but i wont rush you yet... but the next time i bleed waiting for you...
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe don't worry about not writing long chapters. You know, if some readers are asking you to write longer chapters, that's actually a good sign; that they like your story ^^
anyway, if you feel more confident when you write short chapters, well keep it that way. I mean, don't push yourself into something you don't feel comfortable doing it. And besides, it is your way of writing and it characterizes your stories.
Besides, I prefer much more to read filled short chapters than long empty ones.
Back to the new chapter! well you surprised me at first with Seto's reaction. I have never though that he might pull out from the kiss and cry. I think it's better that he doesn't want to rush things. And besides, Jou for sure wants to know more about Seto before stepping up to the second level in their relationship.
That was a sweet chapter.
Can't wait for more.
Update please!
anyway, if you feel more confident when you write short chapters, well keep it that way. I mean, don't push yourself into something you don't feel comfortable doing it. And besides, it is your way of writing and it characterizes your stories.
Besides, I prefer much more to read filled short chapters than long empty ones.
Back to the new chapter! well you surprised me at first with Seto's reaction. I have never though that he might pull out from the kiss and cry. I think it's better that he doesn't want to rush things. And besides, Jou for sure wants to know more about Seto before stepping up to the second level in their relationship.
That was a sweet chapter.
Can't wait for more.
Update please!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG mokuba planning their first date?! This could be either very scary or very amusing lol. It's nice to know I make u smile, smiles are so much better than frowns don't you agree? less wrinkles that way =P Am excitedly waiting for the next chapter!!! xoxoxo
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dont worry im fine... mostly. anywho i love it but i really do worry about Mokuba... i wish i was him some days... okay so i only wanna be him cause "accidentally" walks in on them but wouldnt that make you want to be him