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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That chapter had me laughing so much, TAKE THAT YAMI!!! Lol,I don't think I have ever seen someone call him son of a monkey before, very original. I really like how Seto explained why he didn't want to be friends with Jou's friends, that made a lot of sense. Always waiting for the next chapter! xoxo
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! thanks for the update. i hope that they get the ghost and that seto and jou are happy. i really injoyed this chapter, just wished that it was longer.
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yummy lemon! and Oh god, I SOOO didn't want the lights to find the tapes, but part of me is glad they did and I hope to gods there is some way for Seto to get some closure. I wonder if they SHOULD show Jou and Mokuba... but part of me still hopes they don't. however, I'm all for Bakura and Marik tracking down the bastard's soul for some long overdue punishment!
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really have enjoyed this story so far. ^_^
But... could you please not use the word Menstruations instead of ministrations. I've seen it at least twice in the story so far.
It'd be kind of impossible for them to menstruate anyway, with them both being male and all. ^_^'
But... could you please not use the word Menstruations instead of ministrations. I've seen it at least twice in the story so far.
It'd be kind of impossible for them to menstruate anyway, with them both being male and all. ^_^'
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, You're BACK! (does happy dance)
I loved this chapter,it was a great piece of juxtaposition to have the two different scenes playing together.It was awesome. Also I loved the semi evil Yugi, and of course he will be made to pay, who else can do torture better than Bakura and Malik. Can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo
I loved this chapter,it was a great piece of juxtaposition to have the two different scenes playing together.It was awesome. Also I loved the semi evil Yugi, and of course he will be made to pay, who else can do torture better than Bakura and Malik. Can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter that ending part about throwing stuff at Seto was funny..the first thing that popped up in my head when the reaction over Seto/jou happened was, "what's going to happen when the Shizuka/Nagi/Mokuba triangle gets out?" when you start adding to this again do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? it's PotionsPet@hotmail.com and best wishes with the family troubles
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 19) lovely chapter, and the chibi are fearsome with the camera whether for blackmail or cute reasons. oh and partway through the office scene I notice you used "menstruations" instead of "ministrations" ^_^ *snickers* I've seen that lol moment before
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear about your family. That's some major stress to deal with. I've been reading this fic for ages and while I can't wait for more updates, taking care of family trumps making the readership happy. I'll still be waiting when you come back and add more. ^_^ Promise.
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!! (waves frantically!!) I'm still here, still rockin out to your tale. I loved the bit at the end with Seto being all super ninja! It really was as Malik said AWESOME! Also it is very well understood that RL does tend to give one a kick up the backside, especially with family and we all know they come first, so know that no matter what I will still continue to read, review and love your work!
xoxo
xoxo
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far its awesome - and i've told you once before, large - short or badly grammar'ed chapters don't matter. We are here and will wait.