rate_review Reviews

Not bad...It definitely is going to have some promise

This seems like a real good start... PLZ continue. I just love it when seto plays cat and mouse!!

Hey,
I am more than willing to be your beta. i will warn you though that i have not beta before so what all would I have to do?

I like it. It is a good idea that I well be happy to see grow and become something great. Oh and about spelling and things like that. Don't worry about it so much. I find that forgetting it well I write helps me to write better then ever. If you need a bata there are a lot of them on yahoo.com as well as at fanfiction.net. Little-dragon group has a few bataes that are really good (they are on yahoo.com).

I like the beginning of this story^^

Poor Seto...we really can feel him lonely but his deal with Jou is a great opportunity to make the blond fall in love with him.

Can't wait to see what is gonna happen next. Please update!