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That was short but very sweet^^

What I like in this story is that it is Seto who has feelings for Jou and not Jou for him. I mean this will be so interesting to see how Jou will begin to have feelings of love for Seto. I am sure that it will be great.

Update!

very sweet story

I like where this is going-keep up the good work! I'll be watching! ^_^

I'm really enjoying this concept and story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

'Ko

Yeah no problem I will be your beta. Here if you want to send me any chapters before you post them my email is master_of_lord_of_the_rings@hotmail.com. I really like how the story is turning out. after you finish this story you should write a prelude of what happened to make Jou go to Kaiba... Just an idea. So yeah keep writing and sending it to me i will fix it up and if you don't mind i might change some of the wording or add a little bit. I will always send it back to you so if you don't like what i changed you can change it back. Hope to hear from you soon

Sweet chapter^^

I loved the last paragraph when Seto revealed to Jou that he likes making him angry. That was cuuute^^ especially Jou's reaction.

I liked also what Seto said about Jou's green room. That was sweet^^

What is good also is that Seto said many times to Jou that he doesn't feel pity for him because he and Mokuba has passed through difficult times in the past where they were almost poor. That's really true and usually writers don't talk about that fact. But it was good that you mentioned it.

Anyway, it seems that Seto really liked Jou for buyng for him all these stuff.

I'm curious to see what is gonna happen. Update!

Interesting start. I'll be checking up on this fic to see how it's progressing.

This is great. I just can't wait to read more. PLz update faster if you can.

Ya thank you for chapter two. And your welcome for the info. I know what it is like needing a bata so that is okay. I remember two things: one spelling and grammar are only one part of writing. And two the second part of writing is what you write about. It is okay to worry about your spelling and grammar but always remember the bigger reason people read your work is because of what you write about. I not so good at spelling or grammar my self but others kept reading my work because of what I was writing about.

Intrigue!