rate_review Reviews

Hehe I LOVE that Jou is the one who makes the move like jumping on Seto for example *poor Seto* ^^ Seto is gonna be like Jou's prey hehe. That's gonna be so much fun and hot of course! And Jou is beginning very well XD

I actually loved this chapter with Jou confessing to Yugi. That was...sweet. You can see how much he is confused but luckily Yugi is here to clear his mind *I really do like the little guy*

Can't wait to see how Jou is gonna flirt with Seto. Just hope that he will go easy on him XD

Yay that's great! Update!

I really love this story so far. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy which I love. My only suggestion is that you need to verify who you are talking about more often when you have more than one subject in the paragraph. For example when you say Seto sat in his chair. And then the next sentence is He also sat down, but on the couch; but you're talking about Jou. It's sometimes confusing and I'm not always sure who you're talking about because there are so many possible characters you could mean. You might be afraid that'd you over use their names? But trust me you won't be. Plus more identification will give us readers a more clean picture of what's going on and enable us to enjoy your story even more!

Hired and fired in one day(wink wink!)... how sad... anywho i like this chapter because Jou finally craves his Seto!!! loving it lotz update soon... love (or not) Mazu

Haha don't worry! I didn't leave you XD I never even though about that. I am enjoying the story too much ^^ I just went for vacations like people do usually on summer and I haven't been able to access internet during these two weeks of vacations ^^

Anyway,

I liked a lot this chapter. Jou has figured out what he was craving for XD I am really excited to see what is gonna happen next. If he continues that way Jou is gonna for sure jump Seto before the end of the year before even Seto figures out what is happening to him XD

Please update!

Ooooohhhh the younger siblings are plotting, this could be very good or very bad depending on what they do lol. Many of us have experienced the younger sibling schemes and not all of them turn out the way they were planned. I highly recommend that you watch Naruto if not that it makes sense just for the laughs. Keep on with the awesome!!! xoxoxo

my only complaint is that the chapters are getting too short

I come back from vacations and I see that you have already updated three chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is getting better and better.

I loved the last three chapters and especially chapter 8. This one was GREAT! It was so cute to see Seto all wandering all alone and feeling forgotten (awww...) and then Jou came to find him. That was so sweet!!!! I was squealing like a sick fangirl when reading this chapter ^^

Chapter 7 was very cute with the surprise that Seto made for Jou ^^

And in chapter 9, well things are beginning to get hotter.

Can't wait for next chapter! Please update!

Thank You!!! That was very sweet and hey every good story has a filler at some point, I mean take a look at Naruto, that has so many fillers and yet is still good! Keep up the awesome work! xoxo

eek!!! can't wait!!! imagine opening a door and seeing two naked men VERY close... poor ferris wheel workers... anywayz back to your new chapter. i love it and can't wait for more

OMG im sssooo happy (as long as they don't do it in the ferris wheel cart thing wink wink) lol anywho need more!!!