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for A Dragons Puppy

by JessicaHayes02

person Mazu
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG pwease continue PWEASE???
person Raxal
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good work, I like how possessive you made Kaiba very realistic.
Very little OOC...
LOL at Seto's fanticy in Limo.
Just one grammatical error: “One must always take care of they're Puppies” Seto quipped…
You used “they're”, when “their” should be used.