rate_review Reviews

Loving this story. It's got intrigue, weirdness and of course, puppyshipping. More please!

Wow...10 mins? If i had a penis...yeah it'd be flat out in about 3 secs ^_^ A yami pairing?...hmm..I'm so used to seeing yami and yugi that it seems weird to be considering someone else. What about malik? He's the only one who's unattached...or is he? Can't remember :( Great job!

wow...that was an interesting turn of events there. I cant wait to see Rhia or Ryou.

Delightful! I love their weird relationship ^_^ Guesses as to what's gonna happen next? ...Yugi will stop by for a visit and think jou got some weird hobbies?...that's all i can guess at. This story is hard to predict. Too original yay!

this fic is too painfull cause it's the real thing I love the fact that this seto is the real one.......in other fics I read seto is just a pain in the ass with bad attitude and a some remarks...but now when we say he is one big basterd he really is the way you picture it....but jou...it's not like him........there is something missing about him....he is a free spirit since he is a street rat how come he aint fighting for freedom.......nomatter how much he suffers from empty stomach...he has his own pride.......I like the way you write and I love this fic.....but since you asked for advise I think you should add alittle more anger and hatred in jou's actions.....plz update fast can't waite to read more

Now that was so unexpected I think I laughed for lack of any other way to react I was so shocked. You have got to write more chapters like this one in the future!

oh god keep going^.^ it wonderful

Each chapter is like a ray of hope during my long and boring days! LOVE IT!

IIIKK You have to update this soon!!! I absolutely love it!! ^^

Quite unusual but astoundingly good! Love it ^_^