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Nice and dark really I didn't expect it to be this dark but I have only one thing to say... wow a great story and please update soon ^_^

It's a bloody good thing that you didn't challenge me...*smirk* Marik, Bakura and I are your bounty hounters...you wouldn't want to upset us now...would you..hmm? Now As the New Underworld Lords...Yes I am a Lord..I may be female...However I prefer to be a be a Lord as well...Anyway...We will need people to send to torture Now update and send us a sacrifice...possibly someone with a lot of life and Back Chat...Someone that You have a grudge against..come on now...We don't believe It's a Sin to want someone dead...

Marik: Millie's Right...Send us someone and we'll be Psychotically happy

Bakura: On The Seven Hells of Anubis...We'll be Verrrry happy

There you see...now who do you want dead?? Anzu perhaps??? Or maybe someone more original...We're awaiting Your Call...

Great chapter! I love how quickly you update, and tell the story from different angles but still keep it all together, keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chappie!

Danm Marik is 1 krazy mothafucka. he also has an interesting way of showing "affection" i guess. i don't care he's still hot any way. i can't wait to see what happens when the hikaris change! I'M SO EXCITED!!!(those m&m's are catching up 2 me)

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

WOW!! u update really fast. me likey. i really enjoy this story and i can't wait 2 c wat happens next!! i'm on the egde man i'm on the edge.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

Hello It's me again...update or die or have my three Blues Eyes White Dragons shock you into next year either than Or I'll send the Trio of Death in your direction

I'm back again with another stupid review...like me...stupid

Marik: Bitch you're not stupid

Bakura: *smirk* Yea You Mad Cow...you're just insnae don't give up the fire!

*smirk* shall we start one?

Marik and Bakura: *grins* Where

*laughs manically* Over there *points to the middle of the wood* Give me a lighter somebody...we need to burn the Pharoah's body...

Bakura: *eyes widen in happy manic kindof way* YEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!

Ra: YOU WILL DO NO SUCH THING!!

Bakura, Marik and I: *bows* Please Oh Lord Merciful Sun God Please spare us...

Ra: DO YOU PROMISE TO NOT TO KILL MY SON??

Bakura, Marik and I: *rolls eyes* We promise

Ra: MILLIE, MARIK I AM SURPRISED...YOU SHOULD PROTECT THE PHAROAH!!

Marik: *mutters* Maybe my hikari but I'm no fucking way a Tomb Keeper!!

*nods voilently in agreement*

Ra: YOU ARE A PRINCESS MILLLIE YOU SHOULD'VE MARRIED HIM...BUT HE'S HAPPY WITH YUGI...SO IT DOESN'T MATTER NOW

Piisssshh...You may be a God...but you will never control the three of us...send us to hell...go one I dare you..Hell needs three powerful new rulers anyway...

Ra: *SMIRKS* FINE...I BANISH YOU TO HELL...THE THREE OF YOU...ENJOY

Marik, Bakura and I: *smirks* looks like a new beggining guys...


To Be Continued....?


P.S Update soon

woot mate! update!

I know, I'm not stupid I mean how else do you think I got myself such a rare beauty? And No I didn't steal it I got it for a present from them...Yeah I'm a classified Psycho too...I also broke out of the mental asylum besides...If Mr. Sharp and Pointy were to be stolen from me she would always come back...Marik and Bakura are my Psycho Pals and I know that they would probably end up killing you rather than work for you...however...if anyone gives you grieve (other than me XD) then you can hire the three of us...we'd work for you sure we would right guys?

Marik: Why call it work...you're making it sound so fucking boring it's a hobby.

Bakura: *smirk* Okay pathetic Mortal we shall 'work' for you...however you dare threaten us against Millie...you will be the first to die when she sets Mr. Sharp and Pointy on you and we won't stop her...got it Mortal...idiot...

See? Argue with the three of us and oh yeah...BIG mistake. *grin* Fancy a beer guys? I'll pay

Marik and Bakura: HELLS YEA!!!!

*smirk* Oh Yea and update soon or die...your choice...And I don't fancy your chances *laughs insanely along with Marik and Bakura, leaves for the pub* Their treat...In the Jag guys...SEEEEEEE YAAAAAAAA!!!! *rides off into the distance*

I sometimes wonder why I am such a loyal reviewer you tried to set my best friends on me and not only that but tell my Dagger Who LIKED you to behave I mean honestly...that was a low blow *sniffles* *calls Marik*

Bakura: Fuck Off and Die...I'm Going to Kill you party lines how may we kill you?

*grins* Hey Kura come and bring my Jag we're going to the pub again and since this author has no idea where we will be we'll hide there. Is Marik in?

Marik: Heya bitch wuzzup...

Wanna drive baka?

Marik: ALRIGHT!!!

*grins* Bye You Bastards. *laughs*

*10 mins later*

Marik: Get in then bitch

Loves ya too xx

Bakura: Another beer...let's ride!!

*rides away outside the Pub* (Oh Yea there's a Phone number if you need an assasin)