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for Night of the Vampires

by UrsurlaFretz

person cirquegirl999
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CLIFF-HANGER!!!! Oh well that's what we deal with in reward for getting the new chapters so quick. Poor Bakura and Marik, getting raped, I really like this side b/c usually it's Yami and Seto who are the nice ones or usually nicer than B & M, but in this one you made it the other way around, I love it! By the way, does the fact that their families are gone, going to mean that they won't remember them? Is it going to be a complete personality change? Anyway answer if you can or leave me in suspense, just keep updating! Love the chapter, can't wait for the next as usual, please update soon, bye bye!
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmn thanks for the asprin ^^ *takes it* much better! yay update! ^_^ it's all starting to make sense! bwahahaa.
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*smirks* Boys...Anzu and Gonzubura have been chosen to die...by LadyVirgo Shall we accept

Mariik and Bakura: *nod*

It is settled...they will die...and when the fuck did I get so formal?

Bakura: *grin* You're always formal...cut it out...

You're right...Come on then let's cut these mutherfuckers up!!

Marik: That's the Millie we know and love

^__^

Gonzubura: Where the fuck am I? Why is it so cold?

I'm not cold...You cold Bakura...Marik?

Marik: I'm not cold

Bakura: Me neither

Anzu: Aggghhhh Who are you

The Trio of Death: Your worst nightmare!!

Gonzubura: I'm going to kill you!

The Trio of Death: *laugh insanely*

That's rich coming from a Mortal who shall be eternally punished...by the time we've even started with you...you'll be begging to die...but we'll never kill you...just eternally punished!!

Anzu: What about me?? *fear* What are you going to do to me?? *fear*

Marik: I can smell her fear...It smells so good...

*worried look* Whatever you do...don't eat her

Marik and Bakura: *pout* And Why not?

AwwwwWWWwww You look so cute when you pout..*hugs*

Marik: Millie...I swear if we wearn't a Trio I'd kill you...

Bakura: Yeah me too

You know we'd just end up liking each other...I mean that is how we met afterall...in that Dark Ally...

Bakura and Marik: *grin* Yeah...

Anyway..I wouldn't advise eating Anzu...She's not very good for you..she'll taste bitter and sweet..ewwwwwwwWWwwww

Marik and Bakura: EwwwwWWWwwww

*Flash Back*

*is pissed off about something* Grrrrr...I'm going to kill that brat....*growls* I wish I had friends that understood me...and my temper and shit...Grrr...I'm talking to myself BUT I DON'T CARE BECAUSE I'M MILLIE ISHTAR MOTOU AND I'VE JUST WALKED INTO AN ALLEY!!!

?????: Hey look fresh blood...*smirk*

?????: *grins* This Bitch is going down...

*Stops is not scared* OKAY YOU FREAKS OF DARKNESS SHOW YOURSELVES...I'M NOT SCARED OF ANYTHING...IN FACT I'M PISSED OFF...SO YOU WILL DIE!!!

person cirquegirl999
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh you evil creature, you're killing off eberyone's family! lmao! YAY! The family for some reason always gets in the way when dealing with those couples, though I wonder if the boys will feel the same when they realized what they did and how sadistic their masters are? Ohhh, I just love it when S,Y,B & M are jerks, it makes them so much more fun. Anyways another great chapter and a timely update, thank you thank you thank you! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
????: I like her...*smirks* But she will still die...

????: *grabs her from the back*

*kicks the guy in the nuts* DON'T MESS WITH ME FUCKER!!

????: *flips out Pen Knife* This will teach you Bitch...

*Grabs the knife and turns it on the other guy not rolling on the fall* YOU WERE SAYING BASTARD???

????: Hey take it easy...I'm Marik...and that...is Bakura

Bakura: Welcome to the team *grin*

I'm Millie Ishtar Motou...no way related to the dick of a Pharoah...

Bakura and Marik: *lughs* You're one of a kind Ishtar Motou

*End Flashback*

*Gonzubura is being hung up by nails in his ears while having dartz thrown at him*

*Anzu is being ertenally burned* There see we ARE bounty hunters
person Shinigami24
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF?! WHY does the vampires have to KILL their relatives?! It's NOT right! There's always the possiblity that they will MISS someone and that person will come after them for revenge! Hello-DOES the words vampire hunters mean anything to you?!
person Jeda
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol i hav a wierd feeling that you're trying to kill off all the annoying or unimportant people. i really like this fic and i can't wait to see what happens the day after the rituals and feedings are finished

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o omg, update! bwahaha *gets hit by random frying pan* @_@
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wanna Bet? Seriously I think you're trying to challenge me...Go ahead do your worst Challenge me...I'm crazy and dangerous Are You sure you want to challenge me?
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yeah and Update