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person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Marik...did you actually ever do that to Malik?

Marik: *rolls eyes* reading Fanfiction again Ishtar?

HELL YEA!!!

Marik: *reads over her shoulder* O.o!! Night of the Vampires huh?

Yea...it's by LadyVirgo

Bakura: Oh yeah I've read that...She has the pairings all mixed up

Errr..Dude..it's called "Fanfiction" She can write what the hell she likes...No offence on Hell of course..wait I'm a Lord of the Hells so what the fuck am I saying *slaps hand to forehead*

Bakura and Marik: *Kiss dangerously*

*Rolls eyes* You two PLEASE GET A ROOM!!!!

Bakura: Go screw your girlfriend

*Blushes darkly* IDIOTS!!! *storms off embarrassedly*

Marik: *grins* She's going to get you back for that...

Bakura: Shuttup you bitch and kiss me...

Marik: Hell fucking Hell YEA!!!

*growls dangerously while seething and laughing inwardly*
person cirquegirl999
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What???? I thought Mokuba was his brother, I'd so kick his ass if he did that to me! But then again he isn't a brother in this story is he? Fantastic chapter, are you going to start mixing them together or only scenes like the battle that's going to ensue? Oh well that's the point of waiting for the next update, then getting the answers as it goes along. Yay though, I remember you said that the gang would end up all right, so I'll asume that at some point or anoter Pegasus and his crew get their asses kicked! Whoo hoo, for some reason I've always seen Pegasus as a child molester, I think it's either the hair, eyes but mainly the smile. Creepy!
person ChibiRinni
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD I FRIGGIN KNEW IT WAS THEM!! I didn't think Dartz would be there though XD, but I knew who everyone else was. Not many silver haired YGO characters out there ^.~ Everything looks like it's comming together and I really can't wait for more. What you did to Malik was just fine! ^.^ Talk 2 ya later! BYEE!

~ChibiRinni
person jeda
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O EVIL CLIFFIE!!! I'M SO EXCITED NOW!!! UPDATE I WANNA C WHO DIES!!!....well thats IF someone dies....which i'm sure someone will.

mUCH lUV fROM nyc~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
person cirquegirl999
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who? Who? WHO IS GOING TO DIE!!!!!! Well all I have to say is it better not be one the the boys, I love them too much so you can't kill them off! lol Great chapter once again, now you've either pre-written this or you have one hell of a muse! As always I love the way you split up the chapters so that you know what's going on with each character, can't wait for the next chapter, bye!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OwwwwwwwWWWwwww!!! My head hurts...pounding...boom boom boom

Marik and Bakura: *look at each other* Hangover...

WOOOTTTttneSSSs I have a hangover...Owww Not so Wootness...

Let's go kill people...I see Dead things...than are...O.oooo Shinnnie....

WEEEEEEE update soon Dude...I'm off to go eat dead shinnie things...
person Lara & HOPPY-SAN
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lara:More please!!!!!^-^
HOPPY-SAN:DEATH TO ALL WHO FLAME THIS GREAT STORY!!!!>=)
Lara:-_-; Here are some cookies for you and all the other reviewes.
Lara & HOPPY-SAN:PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
person jeda
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! I C IT COMING NOW!!! THERE'S ABOUT 2 BE SOME RUMBLE!!! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! but first u need 2 write about my 2 sexy hombres Bakura and Marik. i hav a feeling there situation might be a little or a lot more dramatic then joey,kaiba,yami,and yugi's situation with ryou and malik forgeting their families and all. we just have 2 wait and c right? right. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! THERE'S GONNA BE SOME RUMBLE!!!
person jeda
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow u updated right after i reveiwed the last chappie!! this chapter was just straight to the point. lol!! bakura doesn't dilly dally. lol. i can't wait till the next chappie. IT'S MARIK!! YEAAAAAAAAA!!!

mUCH lUV fROM nyc~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
person cirquegirl999
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Two things first! One, if that whole rape/sex thing keeps happening those poor boys are going to have sore asses 24/7 for all eternity!lol, sorry just thought that was funny. Secondly, You're taking all the reviews out of me! With updates this fast I'm finding it hard to find new things to say, I don't want to repeat because you can just read over what I wrote from earlier, but don't let that stop you from updating! Man, I really want to find out what's going on with these other vampires! Thank you for keeping those precious boys safe! Also, one more question, are S,Y,M,B going to change a little after getting their mates? or is it just "You belong to me for all eternity" kind of thing? Thank you for the update can't wait for the next, bye!