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wow, talk about sweet revenge! update!

You know what I do enjoy your story...try to Ignore my....OMG I NEED CAFFENINE WHERE IS MY COFEE????!! I NEED MY FREAKIN' COFEE!!!
HELP ME!!!!!! OR I WILL KILL YOU AND SEND YOU TO HELL!!!!!

Oh, you had me flinching on those descritpitions! Yeah I can understand that everyone had to pay for who they are, and I'm kinda happy the boys got all of their stress out. Poor headless flunkies!lol No, excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next. I'm so sad that this is almost over! You've done a terrific job in all of this and afterwards I will read your other stories if they're half as good (I'm sure they're much bettet than that!^_^). It's so hard to find an author who's authentic and sticks to a certain style, they usually have one really good one and the rest end up so so. You're definitely not the case. Thank you again!

o u r so EVIL!! lol! treating pegasus like that. he deseves it anyway i can't stand him. with his wine and all. he's really creepy. he seems like he has has 'r-kelly' potential if u kno wat i mean. any way,the next chapter will have blood and mayhem u say? O THAT'S GOOD IT'S GONNA B ALL COOL AND ALL! *loud thump and frantic running*
*Marik: (panting) BLOOD!? WHERE!? I Wanna C IT!!*
*Bakura: (panting) WHO SAID MAYHEM!? WHERE IS IT?*
O GOD. help me.

Much luv From Nyc(and trying 2 calm bakura and marik down---they just found out there's no blood or mayhem)~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

Oh, you had me confused from the last chapter, I thought Yugi and gang had gotten grabbed not the other way around. Very good chapter, Pegasus plays an idiot in this whole thing doesn't he? I feel kind of sorry for the other vampires though, they were just following Pegasus and becasue of that now they're going to die, oh well. Thanks for the update, I don't think anyone was upset because you update so fast anyway, maybe if you left suddenly with no explanation it would be different. how many parts are there to the family bit? Anyway thanks again for the update, can't wait for the next chapter.

Lara:Umm.. what HOPPY-SAN means is that she will harm the pleople that flame the story.
HOPPY-SAN:MORE PLEASE!!!^-^.

oooooooooooooo, this is gettin good! So much blood and screams >D I can't wait until we see what happens to Peggy! They should do wacky things to him, like.... make him wear a maid's outfit! or put bows n his hair B4 they kill him! XD (I've had one too many sugary things 2day XDD )That way they kill his ego and THEN him!! XD Ok, I know I'm not making sense! lol, great chappy though. Just waiting for more. Till next time, BYEE!! XDDDD

~ChibiRinni ^.~

I'M ADDICTED TO STRESS IT'S THE WAY I GET THINGS DONE AND BLOODY HELL I NEED COFEEE!!!
IF I'M NOT UNDER PRSESSURE THEN I SLEEP TOO LONG!!! HELL YEAH!!!! FUCK OH HELL YEAH!!

Marik: I think she needs to back off her caffeine...

Bakura: *nods*

I NEED TO WORK!!! MUST FINISH WORK!!! MUST KILL MORE PEOPLE!! THEN I NEED TO KILL SOME MORE PEOPLE!! THEN I NEED TO WORK SOME MORE!!!

Marik: I seriously think that we need to help her...

Bakura: Dagger or Gun Babes?

Marik: DAGGER!!

Bakura: DAGGER!!

DAGGER!!!

I WANT SHINNIE THINGS!!! LET'S GO STEAL SOME DAGGERS!!!!

Bakura: But we can't go to earth without Satan's permission

DADDY I'M GOING OUT!!! WE'RE GOING TO STEAL SOME SHINNIE THINGS!!!

Satan: Okay love see you..be back soon...

OKAY..WILL MIDNIGHT DO???

Satan: Sure go have fun you three and Marik, Bakura, look after her!

Marik and Bakura: We always do...come on bitch

RIDE ON MY LOYAL BASTARDS OF HELL!!!

Marik and Bakura: She' still drunk...

NO..JUST ON A SUGAR HIGH!!! NOW LET'S ROLL!!! UPWARDS AND ONWARDS!!!!!!! YYYEEEEEEEEEEEEE HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!

OMG WOOOP BATTLE!!! XD update!