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for What Once Was

by mmm

schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear me! That was a yummy lemon! *fans self*...yeah...HOT! More plzzzzzzzzzz ^_^
person Akio Amadeo
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! And i'm sorry about your jaw and the pills, medication is evil. I hope you feel better soon, i find writing good therapy and i hope to see the next chapter soon!
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Delicious! Can't wait for the rest ^_^ I'm dying to know what jounouchi's reaction to kaiba will be. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good! And very hott! I loved the Seto/Ryou action! I'm hoping this will turn into a threesome fic with Seto and both Ryou and Bakura, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see! Please update as soon as you can, I can't wait to read more.

Man, you seem to be having really bad luck lately. I know what you mean about the pain when you sleep and the pills. I was the same way when I had three wisdom teeth cut out. I hope it gets better for you soon.
person kisa
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that youre back plz don't go again and finish this it's juss such agreat story.I love seto more than other yugiohs and i want to see who will finally be his...i though it will be jou but now he is not on the picture and ryo has caught his eyes...continue plz we're here to read
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. That was soo hott! You're awsome! I can't wait for the next update! I just loved the Bakura/Seto action, and I'm dying to see what you do next! I hope everything works out for you with your jaw and everything. I don't blame you, I'd want the surgery over taking pills that keep me knocked out too.
person randomreviewer
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! Too bad about your jaw though, I hope that if you get surgery it goes well. How cute, Bakura is jealous that Seto is with someone else. (even though he's with Marik) Pleae update soon! ^.^
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great fic, can't wait til the next chap!
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome! Thank you for the Bakura/Seth action, I think it's a great pairing, but it's so hard to find. I'll be patiently waiting for the next update!

Glad to hear you're feeling better! I know what you mean about the muscle relaxers, I've taken them for back pain and they do knock you out pretty fast. Painkillers are awsome though.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved the Seto/Ryou action! Hard to find that anywhere. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I'm soo sorry to read about what happened to you! I would have killed those girls, and then strung up their skulls in my rear view mirror as throphys. But at least you can take satisfaction in the fact that they're going to be screwed insurance-wise for a long time over it! Hope you get better soon.