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That is really good.So good I'm speechless and Am makeing myself type.
Ladama

i was so worked up too :(

Shaved, leather clad Seto = Kinky galore XD Loved it! No worries about the non lemon scenes yet because (or at least that's my opinion) sexual frustration always makes for good lemon material in the end, I'll just enjoy the lime in the meantime. The telephone dilemma was really funny btw, and talking against someone’s privates has got to be, at least, somewhat ticklish, poor Seto. Next chapter sounds really interesting, can't wait to read it. Great job, keep the good stuff coming!

Squee! I adore an Author who doesn't keep me in suspence *glomp* Especially when a fic is as enjoyable as this one. And thank you, there was no confusion at all in this chapter, it flowed beautifully *Smooch* Lol really? I love it when I'm thinking along the same lines as someones plot, and yes you were right this chapter was very revealing in that respect.

OMFG, could you have made Seto any hotter? I don't think so! I also liked Jou's distinction between Seto and Kaiba, I think thats a really nice touch. I'm also very glad to see taht Jou misses Kaiba, I mean our fave blonde (boo to Yuuji) has such a fire about him, he needs someone who will mach him flame for flame.

Bwahahaha, the whole phone convo was great I couldn't stop laughing. Tea got her ass verbally kicked by Jou, you've gotta love it.

Cuddles,
Velvetina x

Mmmmm, hot locker scene X3 Loved it! And Seto with a ponytail was so original, left me with a great mental image. Also, I can't wait to read the lemony goodness on the upcoming chapter. Great job, keep the good struff coming please!

holy crist!I just read your fic and it's mind blowing. congrats you are perfection!

I very much enjoyed this chapter, you didn't bore me with the length at all if anything I wanted it to be longer! I just love it when Jounouchi gets jealous IT"S SO CUTE!

YAY! Like I said before I LLLOOOVVVEEE a jealous Jou! I really liked it when Jou dragged Seto of to the lockers! :P I also liked that you could of have them get together but they didn't, that would be way to soon you need to wait awhile before that happens (Jou also needs to have molested Seto a few more times before it happens hehehe) AAAHHH! *hides face* I'm so perverted!:( Update real soon please ^_^v

what the shit?seto is making me so mad right now! but I hope you know if enof people read this then you just created a hole new seto and people will copy you till the cows come home. really you're just amazing. and that's it. just wow. that's all I have to say.wow.

This is a great fic! *Smile* I'm really glad I stumbled across it, my only little niggle is that occasionaly I get confused about who is speaking because you don't seperate them. But it doesn't bother me too much. Anyway I wonder is this new Kaiba here to stay, I mean I like him but I can see it getting him into trouble- such as the issues with Jou getting jelous- maybe he needs to mix his old self and new self. Either way I'm so looking foward to seeing what you do next. It really is wonderfully written. I have to say some of my fave bits are the Otogi/Honda moments, they are my second fave couple and just hysterical to read. I hope to see an update soon!

Cuddles,
Velvetina