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for To Kill A Kaiba

by MizumiBlu

person Drachenaugen
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Believe it or not, the popping ankle was what most affected me of all the fight X/ Just the thought gives me the shivers, BUT just because he dared te fight dirty like that *and* hit and endangered cute Mokuba makes Yuuji deserve it. Poor Jou, so injured....now Kaiba Seto has to kiss him and make it all better ;3. The Toto/Wizard of Oz comeback was just perfect, very funny and true indeed. I'm exited about the next chapter but also a little sad, last chapters always do that to readers. You really want to read them, but at the same time you don't, 'cause then that's it, the end. Still, I’ll be ready for it when it comes, surely it will live to expectations. Great job, keep the good stuff coming!
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bwahaha! NICE CLIFFY! OMG, I wasn't expecting that! TEEHHEE!
^^ more please?
person paranoidcharlotte
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He'd make a great housewife hehehe! I can't wait for the next chapter though I do wonder what Jou plans to do now, I assume Seto ain't going to be to happy when he finds out about Jou and Mokuba (I also assume he's going to find out!) Anyway pdate soon
person Burning Desires
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im loving the story, MizumiBlu. i cant wait for the next update. I hope Jou gets some serious payback on Yuuji (that sleese) for taking his Seto. Please update soon, i cant wait!! *bounces of the walls*
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay for showdowns!!!!
person Drachenaugen
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
RTOFL!! He had it coming to him, that jerk XD How dare he push that poor woman into the pond. I must say Mokuba's idea of the phone call/story telling was really very original, loved it to bits. The thought of Seto as a housewife was cute as hell. And now the moment we've been waiting for, showdown! I can't wait, I just can't. Great job, keep the good stuff coming!!!! (Btw, thanks, I had a great B-day :3)
person Annya
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi!I like the chapter especially the end of chapter
Mokie and Jou really screw Seto's date.And i can't imagine Seto as housewife, but sound funny. I'll wait your next up date (will be soon,thank you!)

I'll read you later!

bye and good luck!
person me
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I beg of you to keep writing
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! YOU UPDATED!! *does happy dance* can you update again? *gives out cake and ice cream* Pwease? *does cute chibi eyes*
person Velvetina
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear Jou, I'm not entirely certain that crashing the date is a good idea *shakes head* then again when did Jou ever stop to think of a good idea? lol. Awww, Seto is such a cutie though, I adore him!! *Squishes Seto* Anyways I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hmm, I don't always see why Tea gets bashed so much, i mean techinically she's just a bit over-friendly but generally alight but occasionally her bashing is very funny! Hehe, poor girl.

Cuddles,
Velvetiina x