rate_review Reviews

Poor yami. Too bad he went back home. Very sad story.

I liked it, even though this is not my normal kind of story. I like happy endings!!!!

I would like to see more before giving a longer opinon. The plot idea was good, and the flow was ok. It had a few spelling mistakes that should be fixed. I personaly would like to see Tea take out Yugi. I don't know perhaps a joint plot with Seto. Get him back his number one ranking and Tea gets rid of Yugi. I like your darker take on how Tea would take vengence. This was good, I hope that you do a few more chapters.

Hey sis! Great short-fic! I would love to have this song downloaded and have it playing as I read the story. There were a few spelling mistakes, but besides that very good and the story goes right along with the song!