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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to say thanks for the special shout out. Although we share the same name I don't have your talents.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to say last time how thrilled I was about the mention of Kaiba's attrocious green hair. I just about died laughing over that little bit!
Now for this chapter... Interactions between Kaiba and Jonouchi are always fascinating and this was no exception. I'm a bit surprised at how quickly Jonouchi gave in to Kaiba's orders. I expected more of a battle for dominance. I'm still in shock over Otogi's hair. His little "I think I'm in love" comment about made me fall out of my chair in horror but damn if I wasn't irrationally excited over Kaiba kissing him in public. I loved Otogi's reasoning about being a botom too. Overall just great characterization in this chapter... and the sex was good too! ;)
That's all, so untill next chapter.
Now for this chapter... Interactions between Kaiba and Jonouchi are always fascinating and this was no exception. I'm a bit surprised at how quickly Jonouchi gave in to Kaiba's orders. I expected more of a battle for dominance. I'm still in shock over Otogi's hair. His little "I think I'm in love" comment about made me fall out of my chair in horror but damn if I wasn't irrationally excited over Kaiba kissing him in public. I loved Otogi's reasoning about being a botom too. Overall just great characterization in this chapter... and the sex was good too! ;)
That's all, so untill next chapter.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I find myself wanting to review every chapter. I just love how Jou sort of takes control of the situation. Of course, although he wanted Honda, he was still prodded along by Kaiba the whole time. I wonder what happens from here? Does Jou join the group? Does Honda get jealous of Kaiba and Otogi?
I love the fact that Otogi says that he's a bottom. In the anime, although he tries to come off tough, for some reason I always almost take him for a girl while Honda on the other hand seem so tough and rough, so he would need really strong characters to dominate him.
Keep those chapters coming. I always need my weekly fix.
I love the fact that Otogi says that he's a bottom. In the anime, although he tries to come off tough, for some reason I always almost take him for a girl while Honda on the other hand seem so tough and rough, so he would need really strong characters to dominate him.
Keep those chapters coming. I always need my weekly fix.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sory, i never have been able to spell... ^_^;;; Loving the little instant messge conversations between Honda and Kaiba. xx Keep up the good work xx
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm i got a sneaking suspicion there is gonna end up some rivalry between Ryo and Honda. ^_^ especially after that chapter.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, so that's what winking is. I honestly had no clue what the hell a WINK fetish could be XD
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter...Im glad you got Joey involved...he seemed to be the perfect person to get involved...cant wait for your next chapter...
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter as usual! I'm glad you bought Jou into this even if it was just for one chapter. Can't wait to read more.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Oh but for the foot fetish idea how about you begin with Kiba playing footsie with Honda in a fancy resteraunt wtih long table cloths. Just an idea. Keep up the good work! xxxxx
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah although disappointed not to see the Kaiba bitch scene this chapter was still great. But I can't wait until you finally show what happened to Kaiba. Update soon.