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for And the Kink Goes On

by wherdatcomfrom

person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought Otogi was a good choice for this; it's really up to you, but I'm not sure Jou would go along with it if he knew Kaiba were involved. Anyway, please keep writing!
person Ann
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please give us lots more!!! I want to see Kaiba get revenge for Honda. I agree with the review that if Honda has to have someone do him - it should be Jou or someone else surprising beside Otogi. I just don't see him as dominant over Honda.
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the most erotic yaoi fic I've ever read! I LOVE YOU~!

Need some ideas? Hmmm...we haven't much spanking action in this fic and Ryuuji's misbehaviors should come with punishment.

Besides...how can one make a kink-centric yaoi fic without a paddle?!

UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!
person natty
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was but why togi and not jou, but anyway good job
person HavocTellenoi
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anna, can we please have a Jou seme and Honda uke with Kaiba-sama watching? pretty please? Loved the last two chapters you added by the way. Faithfully following this once until you stop writing it. It's too good not to keep coming back to it for more. Keep writing too! This story gets better and better the longer it goes on. :)
person Monique
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see if that man gets his just reward for touching Honda. Kaiba was mad at Honda for getting late, but wait until he realises why he was. Now that would be hot to see how Kaiba gets revenge and how he makes it up to Honda. Such possibilities.
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gr8 story always lookin forward 2 new chapts
person Llonella
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, more closeness between Honda and Kaiba. The characters keep evolving as they try so many different types of kink. Who knew you could have such bliss with balloons. Keep the chapters going. I look forward to reading each one. I can't wait to read the threesome.
person Lady Nuriko
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of course I want more, silly! Can't think of what to say after this one, except that I am constantly amazed at how you can make anything hot! Keep up the awesome work!
person Havoc Tellenoi
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've liked everything so far. Got a little weirded out at some points, but it's been a really good story. The last bit, with the golden showers...a little squicky for me, but hey, still really well written. There is more to be added to this still, right? Cause i'm real curious as to what kaiba's gonna do to honda next. You are going to give us a few more chapters on this, right? please?