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I love this series, but I wish we could have a little more insight into Seto's thoughts and feelings. So far we've seen Honda connect with Jou and Otogi, but not Seto. In fact, unless clothes are removed, few words are ever exhanged. Will a love polygon form between the group, or will each of them keep their feelings intact and seperate from the arrangement? It's impossible to tell with only the smut, as enjoyable as that is.

oh please continue! This fanfic and your writing style is amazing.. I love the kinkyness! :)

Oh! Its been a while since I checked back on this fic, I'm glad there's more added to it now. :} If you're still continuing, I look forward to seeing what Seto has planned for the blondie.

I've spent the last few days reading this story and it's REALLY awesome. I must admit being squicked at the watersports, but I know some people really get off on it. The balloons were rather odd, but VERY interesting, and I don't know what all requests you've gotten, but, with Hiroto loving the dominating so much, I thought maybe you could incorporate some breath play, mild like a hand around the throat or something. It really gives you a feeling of complete loss of control, and heightens the sensations of the body. It can be very arousing if done right.

I know it's probly pointless, asking now, but is there maybe any chance you'll ever update?

I've read this for the third time now and it's still as good as the first time. I like most of the kinks (a couple are a little squicky, but I'll still read them). I can't wait to read what you do next. Please email me at storylistener@earthlink.net when you update next please. I really want to read more!

I really really like your story and I'd like to read more when you put it up. Could you email me at storylistener@earthlink.net when you update? Thanks.

Love your fic
It's one of the best
please write more

for the necro thing, uhhhhhh, you know that you don't have to kill anyone, right? have kiba buy a corpse, throw it in the freazer before it bloats,......... orrrrrrrrr you could have a non-charecter kill himself or something................................... yehhhhhhh i'm weird. i'm a fan of the story, but i don't think i've reviewed before....... ummmmmmm, here's a website, it might have some interesting suggestions: meo-team . com just take out the spaces......... also, i'm wondering about tristain's ball in the puppy scene, as in where did you find it? i can't. any way, you need to post more chapters. this is a GOOD fic.

hey
i read this story with my lover =]
soooooo hot *drool*
he decided he wants to try out some of your ideas
omg
ily xx
mwahs