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for Change

by Elynia

person Mandy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far please keep updating ^_^
person j.s.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh
gud i c ur continuing da story
it would b a shame 2 leave it as it is really gud
update soon! ;) and i mean dat
person Jessica
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far....though, Kaiba's reaction at the end of chapter 2 was rather OOC: crying, especially in front of Joey...if anything, maybe he would be fighting back tears, but it was barely a day so he shouldn't have been that emotional...but other than that, I think the characters were still IC; I like how Joey just dismissed Kaiba from his apartment; small detail but it made me smile...I would like to see where you are going with this story; hope you update soon! Bye! ^_^
person j.s.
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kl story
i like it, kaiba loosing his kl and hitting mokuba...
update soon
person Earendel
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there more?
person ShadowRaven
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Story. I feel kinda bad for Seto he must be under alot of stress, with how much stuff he does. But he should still be trying to spend more time with his brother, anyway.
Till' Next Update. ^_^
SR