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for Shallow Gene Pool

by shipposister

person Sammei
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, are you serious? Brothers? I don't know if I can handle that. >_< I just thought he had Seto listed as next of kin because he would be the one most likely to help Jou out in a rough situation, but...brothers? Now I feel dirty for wanting them to get together. >_< I'm really curious as to how you're going to proceed with the story, and if Jou and Seto are, in fact, going to get together or not. If you DO try and get them together, good luck with that. I'm not trying to be mean, just saying that in all seriousness. There's been ONE thing in my entire life that I've watched that made me actually root for siblings to get together, and I still felt dirty, even though the plot was so well done. Looking forward to the next update.
person randomreviewer
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brothers?!! This oughta be good. Can't wait to see the entrance of the Yugi-tachi. Please update soon!
person Blue
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit! ok...freaky update please?
person Kiritsu
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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You've gotten 15 reviews so far, and said no new chapters until you got 5 reviews...does that mean you owe us three chapters?
It sounds like it'll be really good, I just want MORE!
person Carro
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG now I'm caught up in this story too ^^ Please please uppdate soon! I have to know what happens next!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update pplease
person martha
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CAN YOU WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER. ILOVE THIS STORY SO FAR I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN
person Jelise
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT?!

Anyways, I love this story. Never before did I think that a Seto/Jou pairing could be written in such a unique way (it's still Seto/Jou right?). Anyways you truely have a flare for coming up with interesting stories that keep the reader occupied. THAT CLIFFY WAS MEAN THOUGH.

Now for the obligatory chant of doom. *screams over shoulders* This is the one that pisses most writers off!!!!

*group of angry vikings scream* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

*Pushes vikings out the front door* Sorry about that; they get a little carried away sometimes!

Signed
Je and Muses
person Ayame Yuki
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hate cliffhanger i need the next chapter before i died of suspece so please for the of joey/kaiba put the next chapter up
person einld
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT the HELL?!?!?!

how could you make seto related to jou as his brother????
does that mean that there will be no sto/jou pairing???? *teary eyed*

awwwwwwww man NOOOOOOOOOOO you cant do that!

will unless you have some good explaination for this.....but
if its not a setoxjou pairing then what m/m pairing is it?????

*sigh* i hope everything becomes clearer later

ja!
btw love the plot so far....you just had to put a real suspense-
cliff hanger there didnt cha????