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by Ravenx

person ayachan
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg ;_; this is just wayyy tooo cute!
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1st ch of sequal (changed the spacing for non-pagestreachedness)
Cha~HA! Ryou is called mommy when he was soo against it.
I'm so happy that the sequeal has started...

Kiya my baby!!! Yays and yayness, she's just like I wanted/envisioned her ^^.
Baku and Ryou's child has themost obviously fiting personality for being their daughter.
The perfect mixture of darkness and light...
Kiya: "The Change of Heart" ^__^ *is gleefully gleeful at the poetic justis-ness of it all*

I also thinks its cute that Seto and Jou use the enderments for each other when refering to their son.
That came out weird... Seto calls Talan "puppy" and "pup" while Jou calls him "little dragon".

-this is Kanzaki, cha~a Kiya don't you ever change hon, out! ^_~
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I love the begginning of the sequel. I can't wait for more. Please update as soon as you can. JA
person Mo-kitty
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MO-Kitty: awww!!!! ^_^ all the babies are growing up! hmm...Kiya reminds me of my daughter... it's cute how she sticks to Bakura like that! ^________^ I love this soooo much continue
person Dani Wheeler-Kaiba
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!! Evil little Kiya, I like her! Hehe...sweet when Ryou's around, a little devil child when Bakura's there. I like. I like a LOT!
person dancingpixies
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The sequel!! I love this, I can;t wait until the next chapter is posted!! ^^ ::glomps::
person Arainaina
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good I really liked it.
person Kagaya
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a sudden end.
person Dani Wheeler-Kaiba
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, lovely ending. Will we be hearing from good old Dartz again? DO the kids have any special powers?? WHEN will the sequel be posted??! I can't wait!!
person nextvictim
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH!!!!!!!
i have the perfect idea for a sequel.
what if the sons and stuff like... 2 of them date, and the other son (the third one) should be staright and date the girl.
xD
that would be preatty cool.
!!!!
and if Asheru and Kiya go out and stuff because it's Yami vs. Bakura, it wold bring up some conflict-Bakura being an over-protective father. LOL.

awesome story.
most def. e-mail me with you start a sequel. =D

it's lisa_ps247@yahoo.com

THANKS!