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for Project: Destiny

by Ravenx

person Gina-B
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dun, Dun, Duuuunnn!!! Hehe, couldn't help it, I've always wanted to do that at a cliffhanger moment! Well, looks like things are gonna get really, really interesting now! Is Dartz on the move again? Is he gonna try and snatch the kids again?

I gotta say, I think Talan is my fave out of the four, mainly cause Seto/Joey is my fave couple right up there with Yami/Yugi! He is so adorable and so shy! Did he get it from Seto? Cause he sure didn't get it from Joey!
person Hopeless Soul
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SQUEALS! SO KEWL! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SOON! YOU'RE SUCH A GOOD WRITER, I HOPE I CAN BE ONE DAY
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2nd chapter of sequal
*giggles* This chapter should've been called "When kidderlings attack!"

Dun DUn _DUN_!

It just has _something_ to do with the kidderlings 'powers' whatever they
may be.

*snort* "Bakura's a good father, when he wants to be." ^_^
person KeiEn
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm soo happy you made a sequel! Can't wait to know has come to the door ^_^!
Please keep going!
Jaa ne
KeiEn
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!! That was SOOO SWEET!! I love 18 year old Mokuba!!! So cool... But when is he going to get a lover!!! I wan't to see him with someone a GF or BF!!! So please!!

And yes Kiya is a brat!! She is sooo Bakura's dauther!!! LOL and Malik and Marik haven't changed at ALL!!! Still big hornballs!!! XD

Loved it keep it up!
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww this sequel makes me soooo happy!!!
person Gina-B
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Eeeeee, all the kids are so adorable!!! I can't think of which one is my favorite though, I guess I have to read more to see! Hehehe, man, Kiya is gonna be a handful for anyone when she gets older, seems like she got Bakura's personality! I can't wait for more!
person Kagaya
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kyaa...a sequel.

Oh my God, that fluff scene of the Kaiba family is so sweet.
I love it I love it I love it.

^_^
person nextvictim
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome
you need to make this faster.
or i'll die.
person Sushi
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so excited about the next parts. I like it already. =D The kids being older are so adorable. Can't wait to see what you have in store for them either.