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for Project: Destiny

by Ravenx

person Az
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* there's nothing better to end a hard day's work than seto-jou flavored lemon-ade... Have I mentioned how much i absolutely adore this pairing... *sigh*

And did I not say that Mokie would be the perfect uncle to all the kiddies... wonderful chapter!!!

Az
person Mo-kitty
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mo-kitty:Ooooh....I know it's valon he's about to get it! wait...how old are the children anyways? ^^; I got kinda lost with that...
person nextvictim
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i forgot if i reviewed on this chapter or not, but if i didn't, WHO IS IT?!?!!?
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. What happen next? Who is the person that said the last line? Don't tell me that is related to dr. dartz... Please update soon. Hugs
person Arainaina
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good please update again soon I'm really like the sequel you made but I can't believe kiya is being a meanie I thought maybe she would be the sweet and innoccent one but it looks like she's acting like bakura in away. Anyways awesome chapter please update again soon I wish to see what happens now.
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
vfdsx
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dunnnnnnnnnn...........!!
person theblackpanther
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is it Valon and Allister? Please say it's Valon and Allister!
person Dani Wheeler-Kaiba
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, wonderful ending...I know I love it when I knock on someone's door and when they answer I have to say, "Let me explain before you kill me"! Heavily accented, Valon, I presume? Knew they'd be back...I'm interested to hear his 'explanation'. Well, see you next time!
person Velvetina
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot lotsa intrigue....but a rather mean cliffhanger *glare* Update darn you!!!

I love Talan he is the cutest kiddie in the whole wide world....and the lemon was rather hot *fans self* woo go you.