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person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! OH SHIT!! guess what? on tuesday i got suspended because i hit this goody goody two-shoes who was was being really annoying and I said "follow me and I will kill you!!" and she followed me so I punched her! right in the head!! lol it was so funny! anyway...I speak laterz byeeeee

MiM

Ya Best and always,

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person Feli Lupan Draco
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mm... Another excellent chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. I got on just to see if you had updated. This really brightened my day. Until the next chapter.

F.L.Draco
person Velvetina
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that so adorable *grin* but I have been meaning to ask how on earth do you manage to get the characterization so spot on?! Seriously I can picture all of the characters acting this way for real in the situations you put them in. Its superb. So many people get it wrong that I just have to praise those who get it right! Anyway super chappie and mokie is such a sweet little imp and Kaiba drawing him and Jou together is cool. Hehe I'm sure our blone puppy ain't going to let Seto get away with that for long!
person Yami Yuugi
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All that studying and the quiz was canceled? I hate it when my professors do that. Good job on this chapter, I liked the interaction with Joey and Kaiba, and loved Mokuba in this for some reason. Anyways great job and hope to read more soon.
person Velvetina
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah everybodys reaction was great, and yay for Ryou and his elbows Bakura deserves it, and I'm sure that the cheeky white haired spirit will eventually get his reward lol. So funny but I can't help thinking that Seto is more into this than he outwardly appears, hmm i shall just have to wait and see. Untill next time!
person huntershivers
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wellwell... I love this story even If I can not get warm with you, writing this in present tense...
But each author has his own ways, neh? I love how Ryou punishs his Yami... though I must say I have sympathy for the tombrobber...
Always on him though that Marik is guilty, too!
I hope my own hikari will never be that nasty to me! XD
person Feli Lupan Draco
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another excellent chapter. I congradulate you on an excellent story so far. I love your work and I hope I can read more stories after this one.

F.L.Draco
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol *pats Bakura's side* he must have a bruise from all that elbowing he got from Ryou ^^; poor guy XD.
person Sushi
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you're so good at leaving me wanting more. I can't wait for the next chapter. And the next of course. You have me so curious as to how Seto and Joey are going to actually GET together. heh.
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHA YEAH GREAT JOB!! OMR!! you can't belive this but I was writting a fiction about to lesbians and well the most annoying boy in our class looks over my shoulder and shouts "HEY LOOK, MILLIE'S READING LESBIAN PORNO!!" i was put in detention! (which i went to today!) lol anyway update soon my friend and email me sometime to..if ya want

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MIM

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