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good lord, what the hell is up with valon and alister? anyways hope to read more soon.

"Ryou stands just inside the door with his hands on his slim hips." - I CAN actually see Ryou like that! Anyway, nice story!

Oh my... I didn't expect that. Now you have me worried. I hope the group is alright. I feel so bad for Seto and Jou. I will not curse you for harming them because I know you have a good reason behind this. And so I boost your ego by saying that this chapter was an amazing, yet scary surprise. I hope the rest of the chapters are just as good.

F.L.Draco

*giggle* the ending was just classic! Loved it so much....I have to admit when I first clicked on the link to this page i got freaked out untill I realized that AFF had had a make over, I will have to explore that more in a second. Anyway very funny chappie and Seto and Jou are so cute....however if thats how Seto wakes his guests up I'm over there in a shot, sadly i have a feeling that wakeup call only applies to Jou darn it! lol I want to know how Yugi and the gang are going to react to the pair getting together I'm sure it will be positive but you never know there may be a sly inkling of negativity there....I'm not sure that sentence made sense but oh well untill next time!

Good update, hope to read more soon!

this is a good story and the minute i started reading the first chapter i couldn't stop myself from reading more. Update soon!!!!

Another great chapter I must say. I always love your writings. I hope this is another ego booster because right now I believe I'm a very big fan of your writings. Keep up the good work and I'm sorry if my reviews aren't as long as they could have been. I promise when I get inspired I will boost your ego ten fold.

F.L.Draco

More PLEASE!!! That was great. I can't wait for more. Ja

Hiya, it was ok I was reading your chapter 5 and other stuff on AFF no one suspects a thing *huge evil smirk* *yawns* me sleepy update....soon...*sleep*


MiM

wow! this is such a kick ass story! ((really it is, i'm not just saying that, i actually only review stories i really like ^^ *sheepich grin*))....hmmmm......i would have updated for your other chappies, except i was feeling kind of lazy ^.~........that was so kawaii ((to use a totaly cliche expression)) when seto woke up jou! it had me giggling in giddy joy!^^.......seto/jou pairings are probably one of the only ones where i don't really have a set preference ((i love it when they're fast and hard, and then i love it when they're uber gentle.......just so long as it starts out with conflict- which, by the way, is what makes their pairing so wonderful and damn addicting!^^))........sooooooo........keep up the great work, and good job on the bakura/ryou and marik/malik lemony goodness! ((they're my other favorite pairings *glomps*))........hmmmmm......that's all i can think of to say right now, though i know that when i press the review button i will probably think of something else to say *half-grin*......sooooo.......ja ne and love as thou wilt! *hugs*

p.s.: whenever i read yaoi, i find that i have a craving for chocolate ((or something as equally creamy and good))......does that ever happen to you?.......just wondering! ^^ *hugs* again, loves and till next time!