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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww how cute. Bless Yami and his paranoia, he really is a good daddy.
*yawn* Anyway I was about to go to sleep but I saw that you had posted and just had to come and see what you'd thought up now. And I am very gad I did. I love this fic so much
*yawn* Anyway I was about to go to sleep but I saw that you had posted and just had to come and see what you'd thought up now. And I am very gad I did. I love this fic so much
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kiya likes the dark eh? She ain't Bakura's daughter for nothing! Next she'll be teasing Ashura! Oy! Heh. Cute! I can't wait to read what happens next.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how sweet Seto is to Jou in this story.
Especially how Jou is the only one who can change Seto's opinion when he is dead set on an idea.
Seto is stubborn isn't he. Haha.
And I especially like the scene when Seto was leaning against a tree, Jou sitting between his legs with his hands on top of Seto's laying on Jou's stomach when Talan came flying towards them.
And the description of how Jou was so love of his son who looks just like his father. Ah the happiness when they are together.
I hope you aren't going to torture them to much.
Bakura is also so sweet to Kiya. She is so gonna be a Daddy's girl.
Especially how Jou is the only one who can change Seto's opinion when he is dead set on an idea.
Seto is stubborn isn't he. Haha.
And I especially like the scene when Seto was leaning against a tree, Jou sitting between his legs with his hands on top of Seto's laying on Jou's stomach when Talan came flying towards them.
And the description of how Jou was so love of his son who looks just like his father. Ah the happiness when they are together.
I hope you aren't going to torture them to much.
Bakura is also so sweet to Kiya. She is so gonna be a Daddy's girl.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! That was soooo sweet!!! YAY!! Ali and Val had a BABY!!! WHOOT!!! ^-^
Right more PLEASE!!!
AND WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO GIVE MOKIE SOME LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE!!! WHEN DAMN YOU!!!!!!
LOL ^_~
Right more PLEASE!!!
AND WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO GIVE MOKIE SOME LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE!!! WHEN DAMN YOU!!!!!!
LOL ^_~
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, very interesting...nice lemon ^_~ Sorry I can't make this review longer but I'm in a REAL rush! Sorry!! Good chapter!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the sequel so far I cant wait to read what happens next
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!
Valon and Alister had a kid! And Dartz is soo going insane ^_^
Can't wait his encounter with all the enraged yamis and Seto!
Jaa ne
KeiEn
Valon and Alister had a kid! And Dartz is soo going insane ^_^
Can't wait his encounter with all the enraged yamis and Seto!
Jaa ne
KeiEn
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch3 of sequal
Well that was interesting.... Those two having a kidderling of their own... Man!
Dartz is probably wigging out... That's five kidderlings out of his grasp.
*ish happy over all the Baku Ryou Kiya-ness*
"Do you want a little light on?" R
"No, I like the dark." K
"So do I sweetie" B
*laughs* "Bun Bun"
Why am I geting the fealing that the kidderlings are going to kick butt realy soon?
Like as in they are so scared their 'powers' come into play...
-this is Kanzaki, out! ^_~
Well that was interesting.... Those two having a kidderling of their own... Man!
Dartz is probably wigging out... That's five kidderlings out of his grasp.
*ish happy over all the Baku Ryou Kiya-ness*
"Do you want a little light on?" R
"No, I like the dark." K
"So do I sweetie" B
*laughs* "Bun Bun"
Why am I geting the fealing that the kidderlings are going to kick butt realy soon?
Like as in they are so scared their 'powers' come into play...
-this is Kanzaki, out! ^_~
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Valon and Allister have thier own kid! And what a cute little kid he must be...Anyway good job! can't wait for chapter 4!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot, Valon and Alistar have their own little boy. That is so cute. And stinky Dartz is SO mean!!! Honestly.
Tee hee Bakura and Ryou are pretty hot...ok very hot ;)
Tee hee Bakura and Ryou are pretty hot...ok very hot ;)