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Great chapter. You are one of the best writers. Please update as soon as you can. ja ne

I hate cliff hangers!!!! What happen???? I can't wait to know. You have to update soon. PLEASE!!! Ja

OH MY!!! What happen? Will everything be alright? Please update soon and keep up the great work. ja ne

Gah O.O well taht was unexpected. You completly threw me off balance with that chappie...I LOVED IT!!!!! I'm kinda speechless now....just wow that was such a cool chappie. But i want to know whats happening now and its going to drive me crazy. Well done to you and I can't wait untill next time.

Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are evil! lolol I hate Valon, Alistar and those flunkies that worked for Dartz. X.x I can't wait untill the next chapter.

whew! *wipes brow* there's some serious shit going on now! ^.~........hmmmm......you know, this story has everyything.........suspense, humor, cute little kids..........hot, steamy sex between hot, sexy bois *wink/grin*..........hmmmm......that part where malik asked if jou was /sure/ he wasn't sleeping with seto! ha! it reminded me of this time when me and my beyond-best-best-friend quail went to the school's health office to pick up an admittance slip, and she asked us if we were sisters......when we said no, she asked us if we were /sure/! i mean, i had half a mind to tell her 'you know what? now that you mention it, my mom did say something about me having a sister only four months younger than me that she mysteriously decided to get rid of.......*snort of disgust* i swear, some people these days!.........but, that was totaly off subject, and i apologize whole-heartedly! *sheepish grin/groveling at feet*........anyways, that was another awesome chappie, and i can't wait to see what happens next........of course, when those bastards hurt my jou-pup ((well maybe not /my/ jou-pup, i have no problem letting seto have his way with him, after all *wink*)) i was ready to kick some ass!.......and my poor, sadistic, hot malik!...........oh yah! just one question ((and feel free to shoot me if it seems like i'm complaining, or something)), why didn't ryou or malik call for help through their mind-link with their yami's?.......or why didn't yami use it to warn yugi?............of course, i guess that that would mean that the whole plot line would be thrown off, and all that.......and it was probably really hard for any of them to think straight in that freaky-ass predicament, but my mind just couldn't help but ruin my thorough enjoyment of the fact for a second, and ask me that question! ((*hits head* stupid thinking mind!!!!........*pets head* i'm sorry mind!!!! please forgive me, and please help me do well on my test comming up!!!!!)).........well, that's all i can think about right now, besides that i hope that when the yami's (and seto) catch on to what's going on (not that we know already *mock-glare*) i hope that there is some serious ass-kicking and then reunion sex ((because you haven't spoiled me enough with your awesome lemons ^.~))..........soooooo.......*hugs* ja ne and love as thou wilt! *another hug* ta!


..........now where did i put that chocolate?.........

I have read the last four chapters. Sorry this is late. I like this! What the heck is going on with Valon and Alister?

XD Just when I thought Joey and Seto were gonna have their fun. You're so good at the cliff hangers. You're killing me. haha! In a good way of course.

Interesting twist Raven! I can't wait to see who's going to show up next. And they took all my hikari's!! Hopefully someone will teach those bad boys a lesson! Hope to see another update soon!