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for Project: Destiny

by Ravenx

person Feli Lupan Draco
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Yami and the others. I hope nothing bad happens to the Hikaris and Jou. I'd be very depressed. I wouldn't be able to stop reading though. I'm to enthralled in the story to stop. I'd have to see if the Hikaris and Jou got out ok. I just can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! I love it so dearly.

F.L.Draco
person Gaia
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! WHAT HAPPEN NEXT? PLEASE UPDATE SOON. JA
person Kuk
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!
What happen to the hikaris and Jou?
Keep up the great work.
Please update as soon as you can.
Bye
Kuk
person Juuni
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! What happen to the hikaris? What the preparations means? Please update. Ja
person ...
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!!!! ((to lazy to write more *sheepish grin/smirk*))
person Yami Yuugi
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, good update, looking foward to the next chapter.
person stormyhaven
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm stuck waiting to find out about the tests that are being run on my fave boys!! I am thinking that mean old Dartz is behind this again. But what is the reason? Hopefully, there will be an answer to that question soon! I am glad that your class was cancelled so that we could get a new update. I hope to see another chapter soon! Stormy
person Jessica
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...what a twist that was...the hikaris (including Jou) getting kidnapped!...O.O...I wonder, with the use of Allistar, Valon, and Rafael, is the 'boss' Dartz?...very intriguing...and I love how things are (albeit ~painfully~) slowly progressing between Seto and Jou...I think it's a first in which I see them take things slow in a fanfic, so kudos for pioneering the way, so to speak!...it's funny that Seto refused to acknowledge Jou publicly as his lover, even though everyone and their dog (no pun intended) know how they feel about each other! You'd think they'd remember who set who up for the blind date!...but back to the main point, THE HIKARIS ARE MISSING?...AND WHAT ARE THESE TESTS IN PREPERATION FOR?!...You've definitely thrown me for a loop here...everything sounded all fluffy and then 'BAM!'..crime and mayhem! Keep up the good work! Ja! ^-^
person Ra\'s Dragon
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going!
person Velvetina
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee the troublesome trio are awsome! By the way thats my new nickname for Alley (snicker) Valon and Rafeal (yes i can't spell) Anyway after what they did I shouldn't like those guys but...they are so funny I just kept burtsing out laughing! Tis awsome Awww poor Seto, he's been badly hurt. I would call you a meanie but I know that its going to be all good in the end lol. Untill next time fwee!