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for Project: Destiny

by Ravenx

person Velvetina
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee yay for crazy possesive Yami's...I wanna yami. I reckon that would be well cool. You never have to worry about being alone yet you still have your privacy, very cool. Awww yay they are all ok, although I didn't think they were going to be damaged. However I am highly curious about what Dartz wanted with them, darn you and all the suspense. Untill next time!
person ShadowRaven
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter! ^_^ But I'm kinda confused whats going on, exactly? Because Dartz sent them back home, and as far as I know he didn't do anything. *blinks stupidly* Well hopefully your next chapter will explain. Update Soon! ^.^
person ...
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update!...........have you already written the whole story and are just posting, or are you writing as you go?.........oh well ^^, just wondering.........i do hope that seto and jou are able to 'be together' soon *playful pout* but i guess that i couls always just go to another fanfic for the lemony-goodness with seto and our jou-pup.............hmmmmm...........i am really on the edge of my seat here with anxiety about what the hell those people did to the hikari's and jou...........i have half a mind to go to them and beat the shit out of them until they tell me......*reads over her last sentence*.....oops.......must.....remember.....it's......just.......a fanfiction........heheheh......*sheepish grin* sometimes i just get carried away with these stories.........soooooooo.........keep up the great wotk, and i hope that they really /can/ trust that doctor...............ja and thanks *hugs*
person Dancingpixies
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't wait to hear what happened to the Hikaris & Joey!
person Feli Lupan Draco
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter! Just the thing I needed to brighten my week. It's been a long week so a long chapter helped. Thank you for adding me to your mailing list. It's wonderful to just be able to click the link and go straight to your story with out hassle.

Now onto the real review. It's great to have the hikaris and Joey back. I'm just wondering if Jade will play a bigger part that just an assistant. And I wonder what Dartz has done to them. Hopefully nothing to odd. Odd being the only word I could think of. And they could have at least dressed them in something different than white hospital gowns. Those things are evil.

Love your work! I will try to review as well as I can when I can. It's only slightly hard to do when the computer I was using at school is completely down because of a virus. We have to way to reboot the system so we are just a little screwed. Back to the matter at hand. I can't wait to read your next chapter.

F.L.Draco
person Jessica
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, the hikaris have returned!...Now the fun truly begins!...I love how you still pulled off humor throughout all the chaos of them trying to locate their lovers!...my favorite line had to be Yami's to Marik, '“He was unconscious the last time I saw him. Did you teach him to fight like that?” when Marik was bragging about Malik...it was just perfect timing, but I laughed my ass off!...Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see how the hikaris react once they awaken with their lovers and if they remember anything from when they were abducted!...oh, so many questions! I just hope they are all answered before I pass out from curiosity!...it could happen...>,<...ta ta for now! ^_^'
person Camille
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! I wonder what happened to them. I hope they wake up soon! I hope the three darks don't kill each other.
person stormyhaven
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOhhhhhhhh..... now there is even more suspense to add into the mix. So Dartz is a doctor now. I wonder what changes he has made to our lovely hikari's and joey. And why is all this so important to him???? Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
person camy
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that i didn't review last time but my Internet wouldn't work >.<
Hey! it is not very fair to not tell what the testing thing is about *pouts*
can't wait for the next chapter!
CU camy^^
person ShadowRaven
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool new chapter! I liked the slight Alley and Valon lemon, it rocked! Update Soon!
Your devoted Fan. ^__^