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for Project: Destiny

by Ravenx

person Jessica
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I feel like I am living vicariously through Jade...totally awesome chapter! It was so cute how Seto and the others doted on them when they awoke...it's too bad the hikaris and Jou don't remember anything...maybe in due time something will click...I can't wait for the next chapter...the story of their lives...^-^...see ya in chapter 12!...(Yay! almost a third done!)...
person StormyHaven
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm sure glad that all the boys are awake and feeling fine. Too bad the doctor didn't find anything else wrong with them. I know that this is going to be importand in the future. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Velvetina
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know the time line either but yours seems pretty reasonable so I'm more than happy to deal with it. Gah yes I'd adore a Yami...although I'm a bit of a trouble maker, maybe I'd be the Yami and I'd have a cute little hikari. Nah I'd rather have a Yami to go cause chaos with and occasionally reprimand. That'd be so much fun! ^_^

Cool chappie, although I am still DYING with curiosity about what Dartz did to the 'little ones' tell us! Evil evil person lol. Oh and Jade is an awsome character, but oh boy would I want her on my side in an arguement. And bless her for going and buying all that food, even if reading about that has made me really hungry. *giggle* thats my Jou side bursting out. Ooh they are going on a trip to the beach. How cool!! Have the Yami's ever really spent anytime at the beach, if not that could be really funny when they have to deal with the sea. Oh well I guess I'll have to wait and see. Untill next time!
person Gaia
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! What happen next? Please update soon. Ja
person Juuni
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!!! OMG!!! MORE PLEASE!!!! PWEASE PRETTY!!!! JA
person tash922
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it i just can't get enough of this story
but why would dart want the hikari's? and yes i consider jou to be a hiraki
1. because he's so hopeful and cheerful
2. because he alwayys makes the darkess sistuacion seem bright
3. he loyal
4. and he adoribal ^.^
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic!
person Yami Yuugi
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh I liked, the whole thing was funny with the hikaris fighting for food. I like Jade though she is neato!
person Sushi
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another one. Well you certainly know how to keep people hooked on your story. I want to know what's going on. What did Dartz do to them? guh. Well i'll be watching for the next update, per usual.
person Yami Yuugi
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What's wrong with the hikaris? anyways good update, love the teasing going with the yamis. update again soon