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for Project: Destiny

by Ravenx

person Velvetina
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They are such a funny group of people. I love Bakura's relationship with his daughter, just so funny. Hehe I can picture her getting older and being so much like 'Kura that he ends up getting kinda irritated about it. Mwahaha he's got it all heading his way. Can't wait to see what happens next
person Camille
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Bakura's kid is a handful! Poor Kiya. She's getting her life lessons from him, but she will gladly share with Ryo which cracks me up.
person Dani Wheeler-Kaiba
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cringe* Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner! I've been on camp...gah...but I liked this chapter, I really did! hehehe...I loved Malik's description to Lyca about how they had him ^_~
person Gina-B
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I liked this chapter, if a little slow, but can't rush things. I hope Alister and Valon are right, that Dartz might just have his hands a little too full if he tries to go after the kids. I still say Talon is my fave out of all the kids, but I wanna see more of Xan, he seems so cute!
person ayachan
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww... all of the people are just tooooo cute ^^ esp. seto/jou... oh, wow... good choice in books talan!!!!! LOVE maniac magee
person Ayeshagirl
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That took me way too long to catch up on... the kids are so cute! I wonder how they'll pair off... and I think Mokuba shud lose his virginity... it's no fair if he's the only who doesn't get any... oh and don't make him straight... like that wud happen with Joey and Seto always going at it the next room to him....

great as always ^_^
person Kagaya
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That scene where so full of domestic bliss.
Jou finding a book to read to Talan, Talan brushing his teeth in his parents bathroom, the uncle joining them, and the daddy Seto, making sure everything is safe sorta like locking up the house before joining his nest-family.
Ah, a family of dragons.

I really like the mini Seto comment.
^_^
person nextvictim
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwhhh

that's so adorable.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love love love the kids.. i want all of them:)
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch4 of sequal
Are you realy only going to do 7 chapters of this story?

That said Lyca's nickname for Kiya is so cute, and Seto realy doesn't
need to teach his son that! *laughs* Man does Malik get into pissy
moods...