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for Project: Destiny

by Ravenx

person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW IT!!! But um...I'd hate to sound mean but....can't they not have them???!!! ^_~!!
person Jessica
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUN! And the suspense continues...I wonder how each yami and Seto will react to that! I just want to see Seto freak out! Can't wait for the next chapter! Ja! ^___^
person tash922
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol
person StormyHaven
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh.... The secret is finally out! I wonder who will be the most surprised by this event??? I can't wait to see how everyone one reacts and maybe we'll get some ideas on baby names. Maybe soon we will get a little more insight into Dartz's motives. Just waiting for more! Stormy
person Anon
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BAM i knew it..wow!!
person Shinigami
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are the four pregnant? Cuz I cannot see Dartz kidnapping the hikaris only NOT to do anything to them! *shakes head* Poor Yami! Where did Bakura and Marik go off to anyway? And who got slapped?
person Carro
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Favourite: SetoxJonouchi ^^
Least: MalikxMarik

Love your story ^^ It's relly good *thumbs up* the only thing I don't like is that they all talk sometimes in japanese but Joey doesn't have his real name, Jonouchi.. But that really doesn't matter becuse the story is so great ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Mystik
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!! Well, well...This story is really good, and I keep waiting to see the next chapter everytime! Just a little tip: sometimes you just prolong too much a description that interferes in the story. Well, now the pool: My favorite couple ever ever ever is SetoxJou. *-* And the least favorite...I could say it's YamixYugi. Well, that's it. Ja ne!

PS: sorry for the lousy english, Brazilian here. o/
person Jessica
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great transtitional chapter!...Things are starting to heat up!...Hikaris getting sick..yamis getting into chaos..yamis getting punished for said chaos...when will they ever learn?...^_^...can't wait for the next chapter! (I know, I say that every time, but the story just draws me in!)

As for the poll, my fave couple is hands-down Seto/Jou; my least favorite is probably Marik/Malik..though Yami/Yugi gets pretty gushy after awhile...hope that helps! ^^'
person ladyRain
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say Bakura and Ryou

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