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by Ravenx

person Shadow Raven
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mood Swings Already....geez, that's harsh....poor poor Yami's...
Anyway's that was a Wonderful new Chappie!!! And your ego is def-in-nate-ly Expanding...
just like mine...supreme GLOAT. ^___^
Sooooooo...I can't wait to see the next Chapter.....LoL
Shadow Raven
P.S. Sorry about short review...too much Thanksgiving dinner. *GROAN*
Brain is not working...cries.
person Meia
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHahaha! I knew they were pregnant cuz I know those signs from anywhere. HAHA!! This story is turning out to be so incredibly awesome especially with the added twists and surprises. All I got to say is keep up the good work and I can't wait to finish reading the rest of the chapters that u have up.
person Meia
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs* Ah, that was such an awesome chapter.yeah. But anyways, it going to be interesting to see the yamis and Seto deal with pregnant lovers. lol. Anyways keep up the awesome and I keep reading as long as u keep updating and writing as good as u are now. Wow, I just so happy for all of them and I hope they all have boys or at least Bakura and Marik so they could torture their daddies the way they torture Yami so. lol.
person ...
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
joy!.....you know.......i used to hate m-preg stories, but now i'm beginning to kind of like them............as long as the plot is good, there's more than one pairing, and it's well-written ^.~..............you have all of those in here, by the way...............i was just thinking *looks thoughtful*..........people write about them getting pregnant, and then mayhap them 'giving birth'..............but are there any stories where their kids are actually in school, and are actually interacting with other students?.............hmmmmm.............i would like to see that.........of course, i woyld preferr it if the kids were only in, like, third grade, and their parents still played vital ((and mayhap main)) roles in the story.............but you know................are there any stories like that out there?
person Jessica
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CY_UTE! I love how sentimental Seto is...'my puppy is having a puppy'...and the way Bakura and Marik were rendered speechless!...Very cute!...Now that they are in their sixth week, it's only a matter of time until mood swings and binging are inevitable! Seto and the others don't know what hit 'em! Can't wait! ^____^
person nextvictim
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww..
person StormyHaven
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Everyone seems to be taking impending fatherhood very well. I can't help but wonder why we haven't heard from Dartz and gang for a while. I wonder when they are going to make an appearance again????? Keep up the good work! Stormy
person Carro
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter ^^ I was little worried about how Seto was going to react at the thought of Jono being pregnant but I guess I can breath out now ;P Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
person Gaia
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! I love it!!! I love to see them pregnant. Please update sooon. Ja
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah ok ok it's cute just make sure they at LEAST sound like they look like Yami and the guys otherwise it just sounds wrong!!!