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that was awesome! i could just immagine jou standing at the dorr, blushing in his fairy dress!............*playful out* but i almost wanted him to have puppy ears, a tail, a sort-of skimpy outfit, and a collar and leash that seto was holding.........of course *hentai grin* that wouldn't be too appropriate around mokuba, ne? although, i think that our little mokie is a true pervert at heart ^.~.........................ummmmmm....................that's all i can write for now ((i have to get ready to go to school ^^;)).............*hugs* till later!

Haha far to amusing to see how under the thumb all of the Yamis are. The world quakes in fear of them yet they are all at least a little terrified of their hikaris. LOVE IT

Great story!!!! I love it!! Please update as soon as you can. And I hope you get well soon. Ja

Hey hun... so sorry to hear you're sick, get lots of bed rest, drink lots of fluids and you'll be up and running in no time. Now, hun, don't take this the wrong way, because you KNOW i LOVE your stories (if you read my review at the end of EID, you'll know by my incredibly long review) but seriously would you like a beta? I'm in between semesters for the next three months or so and I would love to volunteer for the job. Its just that while your plots and prose are great, there's the couple of spelling mistake that just throws a reader off for a while, do you understand what I', trying to say. For example, costume not custom, the meaning is very different and having to suddenly go back a line to decipher what you're reallly trying to say just breaks momentum. Now I won't say I'm a spelling bee queen but with these little mistakes that are so easily overlooked, I can most definitely be helpful with. Of course the decision is in the end yours, but I do hope you'll consider it, I left my email so you can get back to me if you decide yes. But after all said and done, your story is absolutely marvelous, and I really hope to see an update soon!! Take care and get well soon, kay? Luvs Az.

oh wonderful update please update again soon

Its good to see things progressing for the boys! I liked their halloween costumes! I'm still worried though because things have been so peaceful. Until the next update!! Stormy

Nop offence but the more and more "Jade" comes into the story the more and more i begin to dislike her. i'm sorry biut...SHe's such a Mary-Sue

I love your story, I think you write amazingly well but there are just a few things I'm miffed about. Um well for one thing the lack of Marik/Malik is getting to me. Not in the sexual sense (though that too) but mostly in the way that all the other characters got time to discuss things about the baby and fathers showed there support except them. With these two they had no 'private talk time' and currently seem to really be hating eachother. It's making me sad because this if my favourite pairing and they're treating eachother so awful. The second miff is the personally hated (yet much loved by all characters) Mary Sue that is Jade. I'm sorry but I just can't stand her, for someone to come so randomly into the story and be loved by all, look amazing, have the best clothing (described in detail) is...well you can understand right? Again I love your story and it is, as always, yours to write as you please. These are just my opinions that I hope you will take lightly and not to heart. If you would like me to go on about all the things I adore about your story the list would go on and on. =D

Write more soon <3

yay! i was sooo right on my guess ^_^ anyway, please keep up w/ the good work.. i adore this story

Jade is one tricky character.
very very very very very very tricky.
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