errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! UPDATION!!! i have been waiting for this for the longest time XP.. man, bakura better kick dartz's ass before i do!!!! haha, actually, it would be pretty awesome if kiya actually kicked dartz's ass.. anyway, good luck and keep up the good work!
schedule
May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't tell me that Dartz is going to actually get away with getting the kids! ACK!!! I loved this chapter. Poor Ryo and what he has to put up with! I love him smacking Bakura repeatedly in the back of his head.
schedule
May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You back!!!! ^___^
Oh my Ryou!?! ... Is Ryou ok? And the kids will be alright?
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Please update as soon as you can.
Ja ne
Oh my Ryou!?! ... Is Ryou ok? And the kids will be alright?
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Please update as soon as you can.
Ja ne
schedule
May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eeek, bad Dartz...Bad bad Dartz! Lol. Seriously he's just gonna upset everything isn't he? *sigh* Oh well I guess it can't be helped. Hmm I do feel so sorry for Ryou this chappie, he's just having a heck of a time. Psychotic husband, psychotic daugter, first to be attacked by the psychotic man. Lol
Velvetina X
Velvetina X
schedule
February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Story is AWSOME! Keep that sequal going, WANT TO READ MORE!
schedule
February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Chili over Alistar or Valon! whoever it is lolol ^^ I can't wait for more! I liked it when Bakura's daughter kicked Yami. lolol
schedule
February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am SSSSOOOOO sorry I haven't reviewed your stories for so long... -_- we where in the middle of moving and I haven't had the net until today. OH MY FUZZY GOBLENS THIS STORY IS GOOD!!!! XD I think you should do a story where all three of the worlds ( the vampier, Elves, and this one ) all end up meeting each other!!! That would be the coolest and funnliest story ever!!! This one is really one of the best you have done... ( but engulded is still my fave XD ) Please keep you the good work girl!!!
Tonks
Tonks
schedule
February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMR I can't belive I didn't review yet 0_0!
For ch 5 of sequal
Well that's understandable, the reason why you said the 1st story was so much
longer... I'm thankfull for the time and developement you wrote about throughout
the pregnancies... Reading it, it realy did seem like nine months for them to be
pregnat (RLT).
Words have left me this early in the morrgining to discribe the warmfuzzies I feel
about the interaction between Kiya, Baku, and Ryou... I can just say that when she gets
older (10+) 1 of two things are going to happen... or maybe a little of both.
1- She and Baku are going to butt heads something serious
2- She's going to be his partner/ minion in crime.
For ch 5 of sequal
Well that's understandable, the reason why you said the 1st story was so much
longer... I'm thankfull for the time and developement you wrote about throughout
the pregnancies... Reading it, it realy did seem like nine months for them to be
pregnat (RLT).
Words have left me this early in the morrgining to discribe the warmfuzzies I feel
about the interaction between Kiya, Baku, and Ryou... I can just say that when she gets
older (10+) 1 of two things are going to happen... or maybe a little of both.
1- She and Baku are going to butt heads something serious
2- She's going to be his partner/ minion in crime.
schedule
February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yep, another filler chapter... I'm still waiting for Mokuba to have sex... I just have the urge to read about his first time... with Duke/Otogi... i hate urges... but i love ur story!
schedule
February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL I love it! Bakura and Kiya...there's no doubt she's his daughter, you got that right! And yet she's such a little angel where Ryou's concerned. Fantastic that Bakura can pay her to get Yami XD And little Ash being the good boy and not kicking Bakura back! It's all rather cute ^_^ Hehe, sucks to Yami though.