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for Burnt Toast

by aceofblades

person Zack ^^
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
herro!

the fic was awesome! i dont know where u get some of ure ideas from ! (hmmm) lol.
anyways i hope we can all hear more soon. It was hilarious!

ttyl

PS i especially like the threesome idea ^^
person Nightmanboogie
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if ur trying to make a statement or if ur just being silly...but i got to tell you: THAT was the funniest piece of stupidity I have read in a very, very long time.
person saphii
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm ok. that was different....oo? i dunno lol. it wasn't bad though, just a little confusing. . . .
person Rockinmuffin
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So THAT'S what happened to my toaster! (lol)

Excellent job. It was short but sweet. I enjoy how you combined my passion for hentai with my love for comedy. Keep up the good work! XD