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for Burnt Toast

by aceofblades

person Antidaeophobia
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*mouth open* OMG! RYOU STOP HAVING SEX WITH MY FRIDGE!

Jeez what other appliances is he going to F***, this is funny. Can he do it on top of the dryer next time?
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~It was then that Ryou realized that this was the appliance he wanted to spend the rest of his life with.~

LMAO! OMG! I laughed so hard at this part, Damn YourMom this was funny!
person Spaz
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It got me so hot and bothered that I decided to have my lover, The Microwave, read it with me. We had the best sex ever after! CRAZY electrical currents!
Thank you!
PS: You're my hero of the decade.
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bizarre & funny, but not unique. It reminds me of another story I read a while ago, involving most of the cast & various appliances. That was very silly & bizarre, too!
person Sandra
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHAHAHHAHAAAA Paul..... I mean... err..... Yourmom!! YOU ARE A GENIUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!! XD But... ;_; what about Mr. Blender?....
person Hellagoddess
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHMYFUCKING GOD! ROFLMAO! That was so funny and orginal... *shakes head in disbelief* you HAVE to write more...*smirk*

Hellagoddess
person Poetic Pixie13
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O *loves* That is the best fic ever. So wrong it's right. The sequel is love. I'm still laughing. Please write more? You have a gift.
person Rockinmuffin
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter brilliantly done! I must say, I'm curious to see what happens next. Is Ryou going to fall in love with another appliance in the next chapter? If so, I suggest the blender. (Yes, I AM evil! >:D) What would happen if Yami Bakura found out about Ryou's secret love life?! O_O Le gasp! lol. I can't wait to see what you come up with next! ^_^
person The Almighty Yami Bakura
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O What the in the hell??? *dies laughing*
person Ice Angel
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This is hilarous. One of the funniest things I've read in a while! Nice job! I liked it. I really liked the ending. *dies of laughing* XD LOVED IT!!!

~IceAngel~