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for The Lesson

by freewater

person smalvina
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
person tash922
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was great i love ur stories
person Jessica
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo....I love a good miracle!...O_O...Seto should know by now not to doubt his lover! Poor Jou had to suffer for Seto's misguided priorities! But I'm glad it ended happily! Great one-shot! ^-^
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! THAT WAS AWESOME!! I love how he smashed the cell phone! smashinng stuff is FUN!!!
person Luca
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock my socks with your awesome S/J fics. ^_^
And Katsuya sounds hotter than Jounouchi. XD
person Devil\'s Whore
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In true japanese form his name is written Jounouchi Katsuya with the last name first. Kaiba would be Kaiba Seto, so Katsuya is Jou's first name.
person catti-dono
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a good one shot....laughs....I dont think even Jou knows what is his first name or last name...laughs....maybe we should just call him Bob....laughs...catti
person saphii
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww. that was kute. someone probablly already told you but jou's first name in japanese is katsuya. (i think i spelled that wrong) it took me months to figure that out too.
person This one
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! An awesome one-chappie I actually liked for onc- no loved!!! Keep on writing! ^_^
person Midnight Hope & Iva-san
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight: *cries* that was....so good.... I-I-thought Jou was gone at first...*cries some more*

Iva: *hands Midnight a tissue*

Midnight: Thank you....hope you write another story soon....