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for One More Time

by SomethingElse

schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read this on my cell phone about a week ago while on break. ^.^ Awesome job. I love the idea of Seto having a list. It seems that every newer writer follows it. lol.
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH I'm sorry I gotta do it...
You're something else!! XDDD
Funniest KaiJou ever! I wish this thing would become world wide famous so people would stop a little with the cliches.
Okay, gotta go now to see if you really wrote the things 'Katsuya way'.
person LY37
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was so funny! And so true, most of the Yaoi's I read follow this script, sometimes I skip over the similiar lemons... this one was good. Thanks for making me laugh.
person smalvina
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice u should write more seto/jou fics
person j.s.
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god
lil kats
....dat is such a funny nickname
i wonder wot kaiba's is? .....do a sequel, please?
person n.
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"I have died and gone to Kaibaland"

ahahahahahahah, I love to take a look into Jou's thoughts, and you presented them SO well.

If I want more??? Heck Yeah!
person xxdedxx
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahah now that was funny! The truth in it only helps the humor XD Brilliance in motion my friend, superb. -ded
person killer sprite
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was great. hot, steamy, and hilarious interesting combo. well done.
person Hikari Raine
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL this was such a riot. there should be a second chapter and lets see what jou can come up with on his list of how yaoi is performed hahaha
person ...
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.......*cracks up, rolling on the floor*..........*wipes tears of mirth from her eyes*.........wow.........that was a great story^^........hehehe.......kaiba has a script!.......*cracks up again*.........are you going to do another chapter, only this time have jou 'calling the shots'?...........that was really great, and it was a nice change from the uniformaty of some other lemons (although i still like the others ^.~).............*holds out a marshmallow on a stick* i'm ready to taost some s'mores with any flames that you get^^ *waits patiently by a pit that may or may not fill with flames*