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for Why you shouldn't kill bees

by nickylein

person Terry
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this fic. It was very sweet. The essay Seto wrote was obviously symbolic and I'm glad Seto and Jou dissed the teacher. I don't really know what to say to improve, your fic didn't use any cliche and was very original. The ending was quick but it kept with the pace of the story, so I personally really liked this story, please keep writing, I'll be looking for your work.
person Kaan Formidilosus-Volaticus Mega Chiroptera
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My friends keep on telling me to review fics I really like so here goes, your fic is good, no. Amazing. I'll be looking out for more of yours so keep it up! ^_~
person maggiemay
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so good it made me cry

maggiemay
person Ayako
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I feel bad for insects now. XD;
person koalared
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I liked this. It gave me a very satisfied feeling after reading it. joy, angst and then joy again.
Well done. Look forward to more from you.
person MARMangaFan
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I especially liked Joey's reaction to Kaiba's rejection. Now, I can't imagine Kaiba actually writing and reading that story aloud, but a little OOC-ness is always allowed. And the ending is too cute. =)
person MARMangaFan
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I especially liked Joey's reaction to Kaiba's rejection. Now, I can't imagine Kaiba actually writing and reading that story aloud, but a little OOC-ness is always allowed. And the ending is too cute. =)
person fire_lilly
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's so super cute and fluffy. I like fluffy. Sigh the cuteness of it all. Oh and it was a very nice read because you have a very nice writing style so no improvement needed.
person Ykarzel
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps it*
Still my favorite, no matter how many times I read.
Still, love, you're in the wrong section... this should be under m/m. I only saw it by chance.
^_^ love u kitten
person Missa
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A oneshot that'll leave me breathless. I'm stunned. Dunno why I'm awed, but I am. Maybe because this was emotional, and nice that it was serious. Sometimes it gets tiring to read just mindless smut, sometimes. Makes me wonder bout America.