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for Upon A Dream

by LadyLaran

person mercynre
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing job - can't believe I didn't read this before now. o_O
person Mishiko Shinsei
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're a good story teller. I know absolutely nothing about Rayearth and Malik isn't even one of my favorite YGO characters, yet you've completely hooked me with this story. I look forward to the next chapter.
person lorrainelltt
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am really liking this chapter. It must be hard for him to be stuck somewhere not his own. I hope they can help him. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Nomalaz
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Coolies, man! I love YGO and MKR! Clef is my fav character (aside from Ferio and Fuu--they're my fav pairing). I love Malik too. So far, it looks like it's coming along nicely. I will be watching for your next update.
person leighc
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me likey...and shy too. She's currently huggling the update *chuckles* Loving this tonage!!! Do keep up the good work and tell that muse of yours good for him for prodding you on this one hmm? *blows a kiss* Oh and shy gives you shy huggles *winks*
person leighc
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shyness is still hiding out but came out a bit to read and she asks, shyly of course, for more. I second that emotion but will not be shy about it.

More more more more more!

Please?

Take care hun.

person aspiker
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Normally I don't read xovers, but in this case you've got me curious to see what's going to happen next. 8-)
person Silvershadowfire
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah...another great start! I hope your muses continue on this one for a while. *smirks*

I did have one thing to point out. "...his blond-haired lover's hikari" is just a little awkward. I would have just said Malik, or 'blond lover's hikari' at the longest. But that's about all I could find, and I look forward to the next chapter!

Silver and her menagerie
person Kotori
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good fic^^
Please keep going, I like Malik so much
person DracOnyx
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snuggle glomphs*

I see the mage is hard at work. *grins* great job you two. But then, you already knew that!

Drac and a certain blonde.