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for To Lose the Light

by Khat

person Silvershadowfire
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like the start.... and it's a great idea. I hope you continue with this!
person woosh
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is interesting. it left me intreged. i hope u will update soon!
person Muffin
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
I liked the story. My only problem is I think you should split the paragraphs up better.
Can't wait to read the next chappie.
person Zacarane
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start! Please continue soon. I want to know what Bakura is going to do!