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RD: huh it sucks that none of them know spanish cuz then they could have heard what she said and not the cover up of some guard huh but if kaiba can find the translation for the words inscripted on the Winged Dragon of Ra im sure he can translate what that girl was trying to say huh well any ways keep up the great work and update soon Lady DC gtg now JA NE ^_^

Well that makes sense. Now all I have to do is get rid of mine and I can update every two days like you!! My life is extremely busy. I have soccer tournaments almost every weekend, practice three times a week, voice and horse lessons, and not to mention all the competions I do! I'm just glad my mom pays for it all untill I get out of high school. Which I'm not looking forward to. As I've heard the real world sucks, big time. Any way this is a review not a diary. I like how this turned out. It suprised me that Marik knew how to swim having been in Egypt the longest. Whatever. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Update soon, again!

RD: ok punishment time looks like Marik and Bakura need a lesson reeping what u sow *grabs bothe evil yamis and sends them through an even worse hell then ever b4 launching heavy necromancy spells till they were driven even more insane* well that will do for now now for that bitch *grabs the Sagira by the hair slams her into a wall punching her then grabs her diamond coated scimitars and diamond coated steal whips and launches heavy blows and strikes on her then leaves her for there next session* that should do for now ok author update soon and keep up the great work and next time i review ill be able to get ur name hehe gtg now JA NE ^___^

Kicks ass! I love it, more.

P.S. Sorry. I need more sleep.

RD: extream or not Lady Dceandre its what i do hehe ask nyone whom i reviewed before and u will see no one escapes my vengful grasp especially when it involves yugi and the other hikaris hehe well Lady keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^

wow, this is a good story! i hope you update soon!!! *throws cans of tuna* they say it's brain food! (if your muses don't eat it all ^.^)

Hi! It was cool. We also loved the fact it easier read than before, thanks!
Keep on rockin'! And cyber lemon pie for everyone.

Yay! Another great chapter!! Two in one day! Amazing. I wish I could do that.... *Sigh* Alas... I can't wait for your next chapter! I hope it's up as soon as this one was.

Woaw, I really, really like this! It's fantabulous! I can't wait for your next update! Please make it soon!

I'm too lazy to log in. Awesome story! The plot sounds really interesting and it seems so far that the story has taken deep roots. The build up of the first chapter is awesome! I want to know more!!! My only suggestion is that you space out your pargraphs a little more please. Pwease? It'll make it a lot easier for us to read! Keep up the great work!!