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for How to Raise a Well-Mannered Puppy

by Rroselavy

person Nicole
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JoeyxKaiba make a sexy couple please right more!!! iam a big fan of Yaoi!!!! :P
person Yamisgurl
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was a ausome fiction Joey and Kaiba make a lovley couple please right more. I cant wait wut happens in the 11th Chapter hope to see the best. Ill probably be the first one to read it. Keep up the ausome work!! :P
person nicky
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Seto's just the best!

Also, I liked how you tried to find a reason for Jou's mom leaving him when he was a kid, even though she loves him. I keep wondering about her reson in the anime/manga...

And yay! They have a date! *jumps*
person Anon
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!! YOU USED THE WORD ORGASMIC!!! I FUCKING LOVE YOU, THAT IS THE BEST WORD EVER FRIGGIN USED!!! I MEMORISED THE OXFORD DICTIONARY DEFINITION, THAT AND GRIND!!

orgasmic (adj.) of, or relating to, orgasm

for the hell of it all:

grind (v.) dancing by rotating the pelvis in an erotically suggestive way

Dictionaries are Gods. Transexual Gods.
person Kodachi
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I should wonder what kind of parents are they.... *shrugs* Anyways, Jou must be adorable bundle of joy *mutters with sarcasm* Right. 'Bundle of joy', more like bundle of trouble... *snorts* Anyways, it makes you wonder whether those adults are adults or not, from the way they can't seem to get over the whole mess of their lives. Here is my advice to them. Just get the damn thing over and move on already. *mutters* That way they can concentrate on the children, both of them.

However, Seto is definitely being cute and all there for Jou. *snorts* Makes you wonder if that ice doll has been hiding his heart the whole time... *chuckles* Oh, by the way, does Mokuba know about them. I can't remember right now.

Light? Light bondage? *Light* bondage? Is there such a thing? Man, I would like to see you define that... *chuckles* I can't wait to see Jou's reaction to Seto's plans.... *starts laughing like crazy* Heeheehee...

Anyways, keep it up. I am enjoying this.

Kodachi
person ...
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww.....im glad that jou and his dad are going to work things out......and i guess i don't mind if you have to hold off on the sex so they could do that.....*sigh* i guess some things are more important *sigh* but i really don't mind the sex parts *grin* ...... anyways! the story is super good so far! and apparently jou is learning to trust seto more! ^^ and it was so sweet how seto showered jou, and cleaned him up..... trying to help him recupperate(sp?).....*wipes away tear* its all just so damned wonderful!!!! hey! when you're done with this one you should try writing a vampyre (i just love spelling it that way^^) one! 'kay? till latterz, then! -bye bye!
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was jawsome awesome opossum!!! *sniff* porr Isao, thats why you DONT DRINK FOLkS!!!

anyways, i love it
person silverfox
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chpater now update
person koalared
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. This is an awesome story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanx
person Tyler
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going with this story. It is a hella good one and I wana keep reading. Pleeeeeease?